@playahaitian and other writers on this board, please read this at your convenience and let me know if you'd change anything about the story lines.
BGOL has all kinds of thinkers and I'm open to your suggestions.
Still working on the other fantasy novel but would strongly consider this story if it feels unique enough.
Young Adult possible book.
PS. Some notes are missing from the outline, just in case some greedy bastards on here want to make the story theirs.
DYCLAN AND THE TERRALAND BRACELET OF WAR
When Dyclan’s father Grasbyn the village drunk sold a bracelet at the marketplace to cover his debt at the inn, little did he know that he sold off a bracelet that would decide the fate of Kingdoms and lands far and near.
Dyclan’s mother had given Grasbyn the jewelry before she died of the Black Plague (retaliation from defeat of Northandia) and had told her son to guard the bracelet for a time would come when he would be called upon to lead his people.
Grasbyn, being a boy of nine years old at the time has misplaced the bracelet and thought nothing of it.
Meanwhile the bracelet was bought from a tradesman that same day at the market by an old couple who had heard stories of the powers but made no fuss about it. Upon reaching the village of Marrabon, the man’s wife, a maiden of King Yerron’s court decided to wear the bracelet to the king’s palace in the city of Trollant where the King’s healer saw the bracelet and killed (strangled) Ulika for it.
Shaman Breggin presented the bracelet to King Yerron who had just been defeated in battle by the King of River City, King Jalland.
King Yerron and his shaman make a trip to the Westhill Mountains for seven days where the powers of the bracelets were invoked with the sacrifices of seven wolfs, seven horses, seven elephants, and seven pythons (the combination of these animals might is projected in the bracelet). Upon the revelation and the transfer of the power of the bracelet to King Yerron, he was now known as King Yerron the Ruthless and was the most feared King of the Valleys of Misfortune and the Land of Wessest.
King Yerron’s quest for more land and power took from the Eastern Plains of Wessest to the Northern Mountains of Terraland where Dyclan’s village was pillaged and destroyed. Women were killed, and men and boys were taken prisoners for the mines in Trollant. It was during the King parade of his victory over these lands that Dyclan saw the bracelet that his mother had given him on the wrist of the king.
From the first night of his capture, Dyclan began to have visions about the bracelet and its powers. His dead mother would appear to him in his sleep and narrate the great deeds of her people, particularly the deeds of the Sisters of Peace which she was a part of. She would tell him how they protected the lands around Terraland from evil and maleficent rulers. She would also tell him how she was the last guard of the bracelet which would have been passed on to a daughter if she had one.
When Dyclan was working in the mines, his mother Narban would appear to him and point out other young men who had secret magical powers to consider and he ponder his quest to regain the bracelet from a King who was now a treat to all living men, women and kingdoms.
With his mother’s help, Dyclan selected thirteen years old Arbon the Wind Tamer, twelve years old girl, Yessy the Multiplier, thirteen years old Filtan, the Brute, and Creddis the Traveler.
With a team of preteens and teenagers assembled, Dyclan would face an uphill battle to reclaim the bracelet from King Yerron and bring peace to the lands, as Breggin the Shaman, Drokis, the Lord Commander, and Shem the backstabber would try to stop him
