Poetry battles....if you got what it takes then come forward.

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JackNickelz

Star
BGOL Investor
Shane is acting like, his rapping tight, can't get the timing down
You was nice in the beginning, but there is a new serial killer in town
So you can stay being Dexter, call me Pedro Alonso Lopez
Top serial Killer in the world, with a body count of over 300 dead
Its over ya head, Jack lining bodies on christmas eve
It's like Saw, ya locked up and inside ya neck is the key
Here a knife go ta work, How much do you value living
Plus tha posion in ya system is the gift that keeps on giving
What Shane, thought you got away with all that slick shit you spittin'
Like fucking with your father wouldn't result in a ass whipping
Gave you a few days off, ta re-think ya moves
Before you get smack around like Stallone in Rocky 2
And since this is the happy holidays, I'll give you a gift
A razor sharp 16 that'll leave you pierced like kitty lips
You battlin' me...is that kiddie shit, aww thats so cute
Izayoi can now call me R Kelly, the way I piss on ya yout
Don't get it twisted, Jack's the truth, like Bush hate black people
Plus ya flos is a double negative like Blind Dyslexic people
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
Like Krs one said, A dope MC is A dope MC...Guyver
Everytime you read one of my rhymes
you should bless me the great messiah
Many have tried to dethrone me but they all retire
Owl the Gay mack I already capped him and set his ass on fire
Fuck a day gimmie an hour
while I recharge with rhyme cynical power
This attack on owl the gay mack is more devastating than the twin towers
Like Bin Laden he is a limp dick coward.
Fuck it
Put the entire base on high alert
the gay mack is about to get merked
I'm giving you 7mins to put on your NBC gear
The smell of lyrical mustard gas is in the air.
Do fuck with the atropine
it doesn't mix with ritalin
besides you and your gay ass inmate boyfriends I'm killing.
Oh Shit! you just got on your knees to pray
:lol: you are always there
God said get the fuck outta here
For you Gay macks I do not care
Come lemme whisper something in your ear
I'm really sitting in Mcguyver's chair.
.
.
.
I'm done wasting my time on this no talent simp.
Fuck him from the begining his future was grim
son of a bitch has the weakest chin
is killing retards a sin?​



And get rid of that ugly ass sig.
 
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owl

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BGOL Investor
if u remembered me
u would know
better than that
if i'm fake than call it, black
if u hatin'
then call it that...

why u mad
cuzz i can call it, dude
i can't help your mood,
sorry, dawg, my life was rude
but, i survived Carthage,
bitch, you're just something to do

i played it right
i prayed at night
now, i prey on knights...

the killers can't check it
them cars won't wreck it,
ya muscles ain't steppin,
no matter how fat ya neck get,

your just a necklace,
for some bitch, that's wreckless
u probably ain't fuck her, shit
u probably a trick

u a lame from the burbs
i'm the ruler of verbs,
shit, u know,
punk, i wrote cha verse

i helped u rehearse,
i'm voice so silent
in your times of cryin'

dude, you playin with something disastrous,
i create masterpieces
the difference between these two bastard seeds?
I was born so that this bastard could see...


"That niggaz lying, he don't know them guys,
I seen that cat, even though i'm here,
and he there,
shit he just lyin, fuck it,,,,,"

if u remembered me
u would know
better than that
if i'm fake than call it, black
if u hatin'
then call it that...
 

owl

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BGOL Investor
Like Krs one said, A dope MC is A dope MC...Guyver
Everytime you read one of my rhymes
you should bless me the great [spell check]masiah[/spell check]
Many have tried to dethrone me but they all retire
Owl the Gay mack I already capped him and set his ass on fire
Fuck a day gimmie an hour
while I recharge with rhyme cynical power
This attack on owl the gay mack is more [spell check][is he mad]devatating[/is he mad][/fuck is a 'devating] than the twin towers
Like Bin Laden he is a limp dick coward.
Fuck it
Put the entire base on high alert
the gay mack is about to get merked
I'm giving you 7mins to put on your NBC gear
The smell of lyrical mustard gas is in the air.
Do fuck with the atropine
it doesn't mix with ritalin
besides you and your gay ass inmate boyfriends I'm killing.
Oh Shit! you just got on your knees to pray
:lol: you are always there
God said get the fuck outta here
For you Gay macks I don't care
Come lemme whisper something in you ear
I'm really sitting in Mcguyver's chair.
.
.
.
I'm done wasting my time on this no talent simp.
Fuck him from the begining his future was grim
son of a bitch has the weakest chin
[questionable]is killing with retards a sin?[/questionable]​



And get rid of that ugly ass sig.

Life
at times
can be a strange metaphor
for our minds

see we
interact how we
think
and the depths
to which sink
is how low
our minds can go

when we interact
with those who think high
then our minds
tend to aspire
and we call that
being inspired

when daddy
has finally taught son
the lesson
then daddy can retire

and son can live on.....
 
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mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
Poor you stumbled onto a murderous soul
Now your body is running cold
rigamortis sets in
You mumble "Fuck Mcguyver plays to win".
You've just had a taste of a murderous venom
The gods call Fuck you go to heaven.
fuck with me I'll turn you moms beautiful sunset into a bad day.
After I tell her you are gay
I'll take her to your grave
and C-walk all fucking day.
Fucking simp
Talking about your crew
I guess now you a gay pimp
dumbass don't take everything out of context
"recharge with ryhme cynical power" was for one of Scorpio's comments.
I'm done cause your are such a bore
how many times can I knock you to the floor?
I sugguest you go back and check the score.
Oh and don't count the ones not directed at me because you couldn't answer.
This simp have the nerve to try and label himself a gangster.:smh:

And I see you are admiring my work
like I said every superstar needs his fan

Thank you for getting rid of that ugly ass sig
 
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CybaCipha

Rising Star
Platinum Member
They screamin war,
so leave them all slippin' into darkness
I deliver the soul caliber,
ashes to ashes
dust to dust...
I'mma leave the causus asian's carcass blazin'
dissected his brain so bad,
the mods had to come and save him
sorry, ya'll,
It's BGOL shari'ah...
white boy broke a law
had to fuckin cane him...

the owl is wild,
eternal fires couldn't fuckin' tame him...
dude jacked off to shamar moore,
and blamed it on shane,
online whimpering and crying
pussy, it's Richard Pryor as the Wizard,
you's the white cowardly lion..
"....IMPOSEROUS..."
is it Macguyver or airstriker?
what it matter if you white, huh?
just cuz you asked,
time to tan the hide of this white writer...
and any cyba stalker standing by her,
loser?
QUIT PLAYING...
ya cypha's a negative zero radicand
"nipples and tities"?
this fucking baby's babbling
drown it in the brook,
his skills no shield against this mad man,
Ladies would ya'll keep ya kidz out of the street
before I lay him over the leg,
beat bitch ass to sleep

baste ya brain in the epitome of pain
i blister tongue twisters lips lisping inane
lyrical lose em lake placid his ass in verbal acid
let it lash back
I'm home invading placing the sword of ninja gaiden up his ass crack



"You want cock, you don't wanna bust yo glock
Your gun don't work, your consortium is Anti-Pop"

from the song Making the Jux
by C-Rayz Walz

I'll be on here regularly next week some time

My condolences to dude that had a loss in the family

Lady Scorp, Bi and Izzy keepin' it moving in here. I might just have to hit up Izzy's post. I'd rather drop Gems than ninjas.
 

shanebp1978

Moderator
Super Moderator
Shane is acting like, his rapping tight, can't get the timing down
You was nice in the beginning, but there is a new serial killer in town
So you can stay being Dexter, call me Pedro Alonso Lopez
Top serial Killer in the world, with a body count of over 300 dead
Its over ya head, Jack lining bodies on christmas eve
It's like Saw, ya locked up and inside ya neck is the key
Here a knife go ta work, How much do you value living
Plus tha posion in ya system is the gift that keeps on giving
What Shane, thought you got away with all that slick shit you spittin'
Like fucking with your father wouldn't result in a ass whipping
Gave you a few days off, ta re-think ya moves
Before you get smack around like Stallone in Rocky 2
And since this is the happy holidays, I'll give you a gift
A razor sharp 16 that'll leave you pierced like kitty lips
You battlin' me...is that kiddie shit, aww thats so cute
Izayoi can now call me R Kelly, the way I piss on ya yout
Don't get it twisted, Jack's the truth, like Bush hate black people
Plus ya flos is a double negative like Blind Dyslexic people

Watch how I break into what you just said . . .

Jack
I'm acting like?
Behold, I am the type tonight
Like May weather
paid better, To punch with the hyper fight
I'm the inspect the light to right
-eousness
You don't understand my Cell to cellular kite and ish
My Isis bliss
Not only was I nice an shit
from the beginning
Like Eve's descendants
I'm still sinning
from now to the 9th inning
You the type in county Jail to be pipe bending

It's over my head?
Much like New years, the lead is over your dead
It's been said
what comes up must come down
But not Shane's sound
I'm the monster under the bed

So say your prayers
Djimon Hounsou said I shine like Blood diamonds with deadly glare
It was never fair
For me to pop a collar with my golden flair
On your wack rap wares
I walk by and make these grown type women on SOL stare
I rip with no care
for consequence or function
Please don't spit no more of your weak Conjunction Junction
Your shirt you better tuck in
Because with that Schoolhouse rock is it you or Monica L who has more Suction

I don't know
Ask Bill
You the I in I'd a hoe
Shane Still, Rain Kill
Aim till
Your post perforated
you gave me a few days?
Dude, your armor is fucking TOAST plated
And I'm here to butter the Jam
I call my AK and my mic the stuttering man
Ratta tat tat, on Jack's wacker rap
If you got one, better cover your fan
I progenerate the, " Kill Nickelz Stan's Clan "
And unite militants against you like peace treaty by West Coast rapper Cam
there's no razor sharp 16
Just a hater's heart and Shane fien
I target your Cardiac with a smart beam
deliver butcher cuts to part clean
sever your skull from your spine
Shane a swiftly tilting planet
I'm a lull or wrinkle in present time
How could one doubt this thread was ever mine
Shane, the better mind
 

Izayoi

Scooty Puff Pilot
BGOL Investor
Lady S, you need to get in here. Bring the extinguisher! :eek::eek::eek:

Nickelz vs. Dexter (Nickelz that's some fine work there sir! Very very fine indeed! YOU trying to tackle the Goliath. Your slingshot better be way strong. Respect.)

McGuyver vs. Owl :D


Cyba just walked in classy, turned up his rhyme nose,:yawn: and was like forget this piffling child's play. Peons! :lol::lol:

Life
at times
can be a strange metaphor
for our minds

see we
interact how we
think
and the depths
to which sink
is how low
our minds can go

when we interact
with those who think high
then our minds
tend to aspire
and we call that
being inspired

when daddy
has finally taught son
the lesson
then daddy can retire

and son can live on.....

I know its not in the "battle" vein but I loved that. Rights of passage in rhyme.

"You want cock, you don't wanna bust yo glock
Your gun don't work, your consortium is Anti-Pop"

from the song Making the Jux
by C-Rayz Walz

I'll be on here regularly next week some time

My condolences to dude that had a loss in the family

Lady Scorp, Bi and Izzy keepin' it moving in here. I might just have to hit up Izzy's post. I'd rather drop Gems than ninjas.

Now that's some swagger :lol:.Cyba you are always welcome there.
 

owl

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BGOL Investor
meta
latin for "after"
"beyond" or "with",
implies conceptual abstraction
used as a prefix,
as in "metamorphosis",
the process
of advancing from one state
into the next..

can he write
past a boast...
if this is poetry
where is his prose?
His ability in itself
is hyperbole
and thus smoke..
but to his machine,
I am the ghost...

Metaphor:
I am Ra...
Birthing suns from mind
I orchestrate the flow
of his lines
I direct the traffic of his
ignorance
he is only a gorilla,
imitating my sentence

He has been duped by pride
His style has been calcified
by extreme exposure to homosexual porn,
he has become torn
between his inner "she"
and his outer "he"
to alleviate the internal strife
He bombards internet porn sites
with passive aggressive rhymes
lacking rhythm, style, and insight
he believes his anal cavity makes him hermaphrodite
he blindly writes words in ways
he deems are shane's
he is a child
who learns by rote and games
his inferiority is incorrigible
and convincing him he has intelligence,
impossible,
his mind is a tableau rasa

metaphysics:
i give sight to the blind
put light in the mind
flicked a spark in his heart,
enlightened his rhyme..
before me:
"see mac walk, see mac talk"
was the height of his shine
adjusted the apex in the arc of his lines
I'm the ark of his shrine,
i am he who
influences the pull of mars on his sign
and that may be to much for mac at this time...



"To exist is to
change, to
change is to
mature, to
mature is to go
on creating
oneself
endlessly"
- Henri Bergson
 
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mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
can he write
past a boast...
if this is poetry


Poetry.... the art of rhythmical composition, written or spoken.

Battle.....participation in such hostile encounters or engagements.

This was your second failed attempt to sway this ass kicking. I repeat I'm tired of beating your ass.
 

Izayoi

Scooty Puff Pilot
BGOL Investor
:yawn:

Judges I bring to you evidence that mcguyver does have a cure for E-gay mack, simps. Exhibit A shows that even cyba clearly states he is a man, Owl could not resist turning on the gay mack charm.
But the last comment shows half way through me Owning him he is making passes at Izayoi.

:hmm::confused::hmm:

Rocky, what are you doing? One too many blows to the head! :lol: Get back to writin those fly rhymes and chin checkin, 'kay. That's whatcha do best ;) !!!!!!

Lady SSSSSSSSSS- please handle this. This is getting crazy :lol:
 
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owl

...
BGOL Investor
I battled you with prose, style, wit, intelligence, creativity, vocabulary, concepts, and class, I might add...you resorted to basically the same tactics that got this started. But, somehow when you do it, it will go unnoticed, even applauded. Cool. I am not here for a popularity contest. I wrote rhymes, I battled. You're antagonizing me to do something that will cause me to be banned on this side. You called me gay, I posted your photobucket account...I was accused of conduct unbecoming a sportsman. I altered my approach, and still presented quality, and crafty poetry given this medium, and all you could do was emulate. Now, since I've enhanced the style, your inability to repeat in like leaves you with no other recourse, but petty insult. Not even impressive. At least post myspace account. Do something worthy of my time, lad.


Post poetry or leave it alone...

"I made him take his sig down, damn, I'm bad....rah rah rah...growl...grrrrr...."

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grow up, kid....before you shoot your eye out or some shit like that...:lol::lol::lol::lol:
 
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owl

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BGOL Investor
:hmm::confused::hmm:

Rocky, what are you doing?:lol::lol: One too many blows to the head! :lol: Get back to writin those fly rhymes and chin checkin, 'kay. That's whatcha do best ;) !!!!!!

Lady SSSSSSSSSS- please handle this. This is getting crazy :lol:

:lol::lol::lol::lol::lol:
 
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ladyscorpio

Lively up yourself
Super Moderator
:hmm:



Owl you were wrong to do what you did and you should be aware of that hacking into someones computer is childish and moronic.
This continuous BS really needs to stop.
You have men like Shane and Jack who are ACTUALLY battling. Yes they are doing it dirrty but the good dirt...

Cyba respect bredren for stepping thru.
Butcher I hope that you will come forward again.
Raptor I hope that you holding it down bredren, Peace
Mcguyver as vex as you are for your reasons right now you shouldn't give up on writing verses. You've done a great job for someone who'd never done it before.
Owl you can rhyme thats the truth, can't deny that but you really need to chill the hell out.
Majestik where you at? :) respect bredren.
PK? You hiding too huh. You waiting to strike huh. Like Izzy called you the Silent Killer yes
Jack you keep going at my psycho, I give you props for sticking it out. Battle till the bloody end.Respect

Shane aka Dexter aka SOL psycho aka the Hurricane, what can I say. I get those rhymegasms that Izzy talked about every time you drop. Keep it coming...umm I mean the poetry :cool: Not that you are my fav or anything like that of course.




One Love and respect.
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
Let me apologize to Shane and 5cent....I mean nicklez:lol:. First for opening up on this fool and drowning out your post. UHH...there is no second.
I want to aplogize to izayoi and Scorpio the thread was for you and the other ladies but obviously someone wants to make it all about them.
Now a word to my speed bag. You really need to chill you claming to be grown but you talking shit bout posting myspace accounts and hacking into photobuckets and computers. look through the thread where has anyone else even mentioned doing that dumbshit.:smh: You need to grow up. Like scorpio once said..."there is always some one better than you".

Oh! Let me apologize to the clean up crew.
Sorry but I gotta gut this dude

Who am I? Let me tell you who I am.
I am the one who blew out a magnificent flame
Burnt up his broke back mountain
made a midnight comic suicidal
I am most importantly an Idol
tackled Ari for his lady
Her words "will you marry me?"
I am the one that have you up all night
writing rhymes, popping ritalin, high as a kite.
I am Rocky/mcguyver the swagger jacker, chin checker.
Who are you?
Lame simp, dick rider, pillow biter.
creativity Ha! you suck.
you would be better off putting it on luck.
why do you think KRS-one will never out sell fifty?
Without swagger your shit is iffy.
So go ahead write your cute rhymes.
Fuck! I just found out, Murdering Retards is a crime.​
 
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CybaCipha

Rising Star
Platinum Member
"You want cock, you don't wanna bust yo glock
Your gun don't work, your consortium is Anti-Pop"

from the song Making the Jux
by C-Rayz Walz

I'll be on here regularly next week some time

My condolences to dude that had a loss in the family

Lady Scorp, Bi and Izzy keepin' it moving in here. I might just have to hit up Izzy's post. I'd rather drop Gems than ninjas.

One of my boys told me today "why not drop gems AND ninjas?

Owl said:
and any cyba stalker standing by her,
loser?
QUIT PLAYING...
ya cypha's a negative zero radicand
"nipples and tities"?
this fucking baby's babbling
drown it in the brook,
his skills no shield against this mad man,
Ladies would ya'll keep ya kidz out of the street
before I lay him over the leg,
beat bitch ass to sleep

baste ya brain in the epitome of pain
i blister tongue twisters lips lisping inane
lyrical lose em lake placid his ass in verbal acid
let it lash back
I'm home invading placing the sword of ninja gaiden up his ass crack

When you hear the sound, you ninjas better hit the ground

When I spit hollow-point horizontal rain it pounds

You going down - One, two three ya out

Why amateurs is in the ring and this a title bout?

Squared circle

fake fuck Irkles - dick-ride my pedigree

dick tuck, circle jerks fallin off the fairy tree

Card girl bitch tried to diss, I couldn't let it be

Off a pic in my avatar this bitch wanted to marry me

You scary B

I am the harbinger of death here

I’ll beat you wif a book then I’ll choke you wit a death stare

I’ll jump up on the stage, just to murder your rap act

I’ll John Henrik Clark you, blind you wif black facts

At the library, the place where they bury the lies

I pick up books and read right between the lines

To find the lies, like how you was born wif balls

That be the day when your punk ass see me fall

Don’t ring my phone, I refuse to take the call

[Ring the alarm, another soundbwoy dyin’]

You remind me of Strange Fruit, this ninja Billie Holiday

NY in the Village, He the leader of the gay parade

I'm just dousin' you wif rhymes, now I'm a let you soak and marinade

oak and barrel sommelier, premier est le denier

Yes

I'm also talkin that French shit

I spit in different languages, but I'm a let you languish it

No me hoda mariposa I can also bring it Spanish kid

Stop now, mayne you better fuckin forfeit

Get on your knees and praise whoever you worship
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
Get on your knees and praise whoever you worship


That would be me

and I aint saving that gay ass trick.

McGuyver aint giving a shit he bringing it.

Ring the alaaaaaaaaarrrrrrm, and now the God's are caaaaaaaaalllin'
woooo, wooo!!!

"Ring the alarm? Woooo, Woooo?"

Fuck's wrong with you?

OH WAIT, I got a clue you gay, not an owl you are fucking cuckoo

This may explain some of the dumbshit you do.

creative...:smh:...colorful....:yes:

I'll even say you are blessed

for being more colorful than a bag of skittles

You and that queer jack Nicklez.​
 
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ladyscorpio

Lively up yourself
Super Moderator
One of my boys told me today "why not drop gems AND ninjas?



When you hear the sound, you ninjas better hit the ground

When I spit hollow-point horizontal rain it pounds

You going down - One, two three ya out

Why amateurs is in the ring and this a title bout?

Squared circle

fake fuck Irkles - dick-ride my pedigree

dick tuck, circle jerks fallin off the fairy tree

Card girl bitch tried to diss, I couldn't let it be

Off a pic in my avatar this bitch wanted to marry me

You scary B

I am the harbinger of death here

I’ll beat you wif a book then I’ll choke you wit a death stare

I’ll jump up on the stage, just to murder your rap act

I’ll John Henrik Clark you, blind you wif black facts

At the library, the place where they bury the lies

I pick up books and read right between the lines

To find the lies, like how you was born wif balls

That be the day when your punk ass see me fall

Don’t ring my phone, I refuse to take the call

[Ring the alarm, another soundbwoy dyin’]

You remind me of Strange Fruit, this ninja Billie Holiday

NY in the Village, He the leader of the gay parade

I'm just dousin' you wif rhymes, now I'm a let you soak and marinade

oak and barrel sommelier, premier est le denier

Yes

I'm also talkin that French shit

I spit in different languages, but I'm a let you languish it

No me hoda mariposa I can also bring it Spanish kid

Stop now, mayne you better fuckin forfeit

Get on your knees and praise whoever you worship


:eek::eek: did some say fyah....murder dem...cipha you come hard bredren...nicness


Hmmm so guyver I see you come mo time again...like to sneak in that upper cut dontcha.:yes:
 

Izayoi

Scooty Puff Pilot
BGOL Investor
Not commenting on the rest, keeping it strictly word biz. That's why I'm here. Hopefully, everybody is back in the game and on the right mind path.

meta
latin for "after"
"beyond" or "with",
implies conceptual abstraction
used as a prefix,
as in "metamorphosis",
the process
of advancing from one state
into the next..

can he write
past a boast...
if this is poetry
where is his prose?
His ability in itself
is hyperbole
and thus smoke..
but to his machine,
I am the ghost...


...
metaphysics:
i give sight to the blind
put light in the mind
flicked a spark in his heart,
enlightened his rhyme..


...


"To exist is to
change, to
change is to
mature, to
mature is to go
on creating
oneself
endlessly"
- Henri Bergson

That's some beautiful turn of phrase my ninja and you know I caught that anime reference in that first verse, right? :) Thank you for the Bergson quote. I wasn't familiar with it,but I shall not forget it. SOmething about it and you tickle my third eye a little, Owl. I shall ponder when next I meditate. ;)

Who am I? Let me tell you who I am.
I am the one who blew out a magnificent flame
Burnt up his broke back mountain
made a midnight comic suicidal
I am most importantly an Idol
tackled Ari for his lady
Her words "will you marry me?"
I am the one that have you up all night
writing rhymes, popping ritalin, high as a kite.
I am Rocky/mcguyver the swagger jacker, chin checker.
Who are you?

That's deadly right there Rock. I like how you cataloged the players and your battle. What happened to Midnight- wow that kid could draw :yes:
Maybe you issued a too hard blow, Rock!

One of my boys told me today "why not drop gems AND ninjas?

When you hear the sound, you ninjas better hit the ground
When I spit hollow-point horizontal rain it pounds
You going down - One, two three ya out
Why amateurs is in the ring and this a title bout?
Squared circle
fake fuck Irkles - dick-ride my pedigree
dick tuck, circle jerks fallin off the fairy tree
Card girl bitch tried to diss, I couldn't let it be
Off a pic in my avatar this bitch wanted to marry me
You scary B
I am the harbinger of death here
I’ll beat you wif a book then I’ll choke you wit a death stare
I’ll jump up on the stage, just to murder your rap act
I’ll John Henrik Clark you, blind you wif black facts
At the library, the place where they bury the lies
I pick up books and read right between the lines
To find the lies, like how you was born wif balls
That be the day when your punk ass see me fall
Don’t ring my phone, I refuse to take the call
[Ring the alarm, another soundbwoy dyin’]
You remind me of Strange Fruit, this ninja Billie Holiday
NY in the Village, He the leader of the gay parade
I'm just dousin' you wif rhymes, now I'm a let you soak and marinade
oak and barrel sommelier, premier est le denier
Yes
I'm also talkin that French shit
I spit in different languages, but I'm a let you languish it
No me hoda mariposa I can also bring it Spanish kid
Stop now, mayne you better fuckin forfeit
Get on your knees and praise whoever you worship

Multiple- Rhymegasms imminent. :eek::eek::eek:
Some of the finest flow I've seen in this thread.
Cyba you on my list of shine baby- that's some quality and fire ish right there. He hit with the languages :lol: It was as Denzel said in an interview about American Gangster "elegant violence." That's you Cyba!
 

ladyscorpio

Lively up yourself
Super Moderator
Not commenting on the rest, keeping it strictly word biz. That's why I'm here. Hopefully, everybody is back in the game and on the right mind path.

That's some beautiful turn of phrase my ninja and you know I caught that anime reference in that first verse, right? :) Thank you for the Bergson quote. I wasn't familiar with it,but I shall not forget it. SOmething about it and you tickle my third eye a little, Owl. I shall ponder when next I meditate. ;)

That's deadly right there Rock. I like how you cataloged the players and your battle. What happened to Midnight- wow that kid could draw :yes:
Maybe you issued a too hard blow, Rock!



Multiple- Rhymegasms imminent. :eek::eek::eek:
Some of the finest flow I've seen in this thread.
Cyba you on my list of shine baby- that's some quality and fire ish right there. He hit with the languages :lol: It was as Denzel said in an interview about American Gangster "elegant violence." That's you Cyba!

He got someting Izzy :yes: when he hit with the languages I was in mini convulsions :D yeah you know the ones :cool: He brought HEAT :yes:
 

Izayoi

Scooty Puff Pilot
BGOL Investor
He got someting Izzy :yes: when he hit with the languages I was in mini convulsions :D yeah you know the ones :cool: He brought HEAT :yes:

That's what I'm talking about- leaving the challengers with the bitter taste, but the rhyme so silky like a fine Merlot in my mouth. :yes:
 

owl

...
BGOL Investor
I'm still a P.R.T.
although we
are only
point zero three.
You may be Boule,
Who sent you?
I been building the ark
before I knew
what I was knocking nails into.

Buy yourself a clue, my son,
Your climax was a quickie,
I AM THE ONE..
I talked to Jesus,
Breaking bread with the homeless,
You are just
a rookie
looking for a stripe,
I infuse Jah
with every word i type or write.

You wish to achieve 'ME',
I'm the '08 Mazzini,
You're posting,
I'm fishing.
You're a child playing,
I'm a man on a mission.


I'm a creator,
You are just
a reproductive organ,
Lured in,
By sirens gone bored.
I'm not a pimp,
Yet
I control the flow of the whoring.

You are the lord of sand.
I'm ghetto driven,
'risen to the four point stance,
(that's called foundation)
I make the 5 sided pentacle,
(that's the creation)
Try your six,
(that's rebellion and change)
I bring the seven
(also known as the perfect man)
How you doing at eight, unsteady?
(That's build and destroy,
the essence of infinity)
This is your nine...
(oh yeah, that's numerology
for finish line....)
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
I battled you with prose, style, wit, intelligence, creativity, vocabulary, concepts, and class,
:hmm:

Are you serious?
You can't write 4 lines without Bitch and nigga curses.
That lame ass poem you posted in the love thread serves as evidence
you have limited intelligence.
Hack into myspace?
Your whining is about to make me catch a case
Kill yourself, you are a disgrace to the gay race.
A gay simp hooked on freebasin
Hey Stupid you are not listen.
These are poems
Hacking into accounts makes no sense
Your recollection of the chain of events is bent.
Not another second will be wasted on your sniffling.
One more whine from you and you are on ignore.
That will grant your wish, and put end to my slaughter.​
 
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owl

...
BGOL Investor
:hmm:

Are you serious?
You can write 4 lines without Bitch and nigga curses.
That lame ass poem you posted in the love thread serves as evidence
you have limited intelligence.
Hack into myspace?
Your whining is about to make me catch a case
Kill yourself, you are a disgrace to the gay race.
A gay simp hooked on freebasin
Hey Stupid you are not listen.
These are poems
Hacking into accounts makes no sense
Your recollection of the chain of events is bent.
Not another second will be wasted on your sniffling.
One more whine from you and you are on ignore.
That will grant your wish, and put end to my slaughter.​


Sometimes i rhyme slow
sometimes i rhyme quick,
sometimes his lines are trash,
most times they're just shit,

Arrogance
insecure rants
i water them all like plants
I don't rhyme, little man,
I electronically inscribe chants..

I guess I should be flattered,
he imitates my every pattern,
I explode drones like a plan for Saturn,
feel like i'm the battle urn,
I battle a younger me,
every time it's this cat's turn...

excellence,
i preeminate...
him backwards Oedipus complex..
translation:
him praise papa's penis...
i bring this
bits and digits
wires and widgets
import god's thought
him think we fought,
i know
I just
advanced his mental apparatus,

still,
I give fire to iblis
i am the light in this
luciferian gospel
i deal with prometheus,
fucking vultures
"swagger jacker"
he's copying my decomposed cultures,
Dude, I am the path...
I bring lost ones
to the glow
sun
I am ONE,
from I
big bang birth blast
universes burst
and blood bath
gurgled out his last laugh

I am the dynamic elevated Thoth
with every character I bring
ya solar plexus sings,
ya don't realize
I agitate the energy rise
inside
your medulla oblongata...
he miss his hits
him blind shotta

I just reign smarter
ya earth is wet and dirt...

I bring the lava...

You marvel
you're just a larva,
I swarm his mind
I am the monsoon..
i track the beat of moon
and channel Nat soon
he be channeling
sambo, buck, and coon
you need to prevaricate
play another game
your just a grain on my plate
queen to king's pawn eight
check mate!!!
him battle stations manned
but besieged

mac, stay in your own league,please...

Sometimes i rhyme slow
sometimes i rhyme quick,
quick,quick...
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
sometimes you rhyme slow?
sometimes you rhyme quick?
is that why you rhymes sound like shit?
I'm packing low blows in my flows
grab your crucifix, rabbits foot, four leaf clover
You mentioned Jehovah
He sent me to make sure your life was ova
You should fear mcguyver
he walks on water from his bowels he spits fire
he holds all you desire
Bow down quick or I'll make you expire
Hey self proclaimed genius
you should read the book of genesis
you could have seen the coming of me unfold
God visited Abraham when he was 99yrs old
To announce the coming of the covenant child.
Damn aint this shit wild.


Sometimes you rhyme slow?
sometimes you rhyme quick?
You will always be a cheap trick.​

Lemme step back and let cyba get at your simp ass for a min. I'm getting in his way.
 
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owl

...
BGOL Investor
sometimes you rhyme slow?
sometimes you rhyme quick?
is that why you rhymes sound like shit?
I'm packing low blows in my flows
grab your crucifix, rabbits foot, four leave clover
You mentioned Jehovah
He sent me to make sure your life was ova
You should fear mcguyver
he walks on water from his bowels he spits fire
he holds all you desire
Bow down quick or I'll make you expire
Hey self proclaimed genius
you should read the book of genesis
you could have seen the coming of me unfold
God visited Abraham when he was 99yrs old
To announce the coming of the covenant child.
Damn aint this shit wild.


Sometimes you rhyme slow?
sometimes you rhyme quick?
You will always be a cheap trick.​

Lemme step back and let cyba get at your simp ass for a min. I'm getting in his way.

dude, you really ought to thank me...

i should've took up teaching
instead of being shook up by police men,
i'm still out of your reach, man
but I'm glad you are finally reaching...

you are a playmate,
i state great,
and build minds
from outside of time
and space
I'm face to face
with jah, ra, and allah,
i create fate,
you're still behind the west gate,
i collapse the neuron
expand the synapse
walk the waters of ya mind
like jesus meeting pro. X,
but poetry is more than
religious and philosophical analogies

why are you breaking your phalangies
rephrasing me, insanely,
when you can't understand me?
STOP THE INSANITY...
 

mcguyver

Rising Star
OG Investor
dude, you really ought to thank me...

i should've took up teaching
instead of being shook up by police men,
i'm still out of your reach, man
but I'm glad you are finally reaching...

you are a playmate,
i state great,
and build minds
from outside of time
and space
I'm face to face
with jah, ra, and allah,
i create fate,
you're still behind the west gate,
i collapse the neuron
expand the synapse
walk the waters of ya mind
like jesus meeting pro. X,
but poetry is more than
religious and philosophical analogies

why are you breaking your phalangies
rephrasing me, insanely,
when you can't understand me?
STOP THE INSANITY...

:yawn:

You couldn't hack your way out of a wet paper bag
In my account looking for my naked pics. You are such a fag
Fuck you and your myspace account
I turned this battle into a card game and you got trumped
Trick you had no clue
What the fuck I could do
I'd merk the whole fucking zoo
just to get at you
I'm Dirty Harry packing a 357, you have a 22
this is a gunfight you overdrew
I fight dirty I fired before the count reached 2
If art imitates life you are a zero
Calling me white? then I'm Al Paccino
"say hello to my little friend"
UH OH, I'm loading the glocks again
Moist motherfucker if you can't hang
You can't bang
Its ok battling is not your thang.
Get off the field you've been benched
 

LeroyDibiase

Rising Star
Registered
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Damn a nigga gettin kilt in here.
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lojikal1

Potential Star
Registered
Man,

somebody want to start a new thread for new challengers??? I would jump in this one but looks like ish is getting personal...
 

CybaCipha

Rising Star
Platinum Member
Go ahead and jump in Lojik ....... Macguyver and Owl been going at it from day 1. I personally believe they were childhood friends who used to play pranks on each other on the playground.
 

owl

...
BGOL Investor
three against the god
trinity
falls amongst the odd
how many screen names in one pod?
cowards run in packs
still can't counteract
the fact
that mac can't write
or rap
consequences
leave their marks with temper
pm some more ninjaz quicker
miss me with the pointing fingers
you
will not
crucify
this anointed figure...
dudes, do what you like
but I know
inside his mind
the conscious energies fry
you couldn't buy a better
line bringer
dimes linger
without me dropping
a naked picture
i'm richer in thought
that's why the envy
is brought
i teach without being taught
reach without being wrought
purchase a learner's license
enlist a better crew of fist
before you try to
tackle
the trainer of iblis
finished
 

Izayoi

Scooty Puff Pilot
BGOL Investor
Man,

somebody want to start a new thread for new challengers??? I would jump in this one but looks like ish is getting personal...

Go ahead and jump in Lojik ....... Macguyver and Owl been going at it from day 1. I personally believe they were childhood friends who used to play pranks on each other on the playground.

:yes::yes::yes:

Lojik, please jump in and do you! I'm excited for anybody that wants to post and I'm sure Lady S feels the same.

Owl and McGuyver doing their own killing floor thing right now- I'm going to step back and let that do what it do.

As Lady S mentioned, this is rhyme BATTLE not BEEF nor was it ever intended to be such.

Keep it sportsman Lojik, but other than that no rhyme holds barred baby.:)
 

CybaCipha

Rising Star
Platinum Member
three against the god
trinity
falls amongst the odd
how many screen names in one pod?
cowards run in packs
still can't counteract
the fact
that mac can't write
or rap
consequences
leave their marks with temper
pm some more ninjaz quicker
miss me with the pointing fingers
you
will not
crucify
this anointed figure...
dudes, do what you like
but I know
inside his mind
the conscious energies fry
you couldn't buy a better
line bringer
dimes linger
without me dropping
a naked picture
i'm richer in thought
that's why the envy
is brought
i teach without being taught
reach without being wrought
purchase a learner's license
enlist a better crew of fist
before you try to
tackle
the trainer of iblis
finished

Yo owl, I don't want you to feel like you being triple teamed fam. I got a little heated when you thought I was a female. You really brought that on yourself. Thanks for the inspiration though I haven't written in years.
 
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