Poetry battles....if you got what it takes then come forward.

[ladyscorpio]

Spin off from Izayoi poetry thread. Bless sista
Here is where it all began, blame my twin S. Scorpio. She likes to cause trouble

Mcguyver
To SEXY_SCORPIO

Let me first start of with an apology to aristotlesown.

But brother you should have known.

An oppotunist is what you called me .

So I have to take this opportunity I see.

Sexy_Scorpio I warned you.

The day of the pretty light skinned brothers is through.

Chocolate Brothers We've been back.

Told you pretty light skinned was wack.

Let me pump my brakes for a minute.

But this poem has yet to have you in it.

This poem is not about him its about you.

Oh BTW, I happened to mention me too.

Gorgeous chocolate sista this can't be.

A chocolate angel sent for me?

You ignored me when I said he doesn't appreciate you.

But let me tell you what I would do.

A candle light dinner just me and you.

A bubble bath and full body massage too.

A foot massage I know you would like.

But wait, this is just the begining of the night.

Scented candles all around.

We'll start on the bed end on the ground.

Hot sweaty sex all night long.

I end this poem with one question.

Did this chocolate beauty come from heaven?​

Then my sister decided that she would give this reply....

Originally Posted by SEXY_SCORPIO
MARRY ME

Her then hubby countered with this

AristotlesOwn

That fool Mcguyver tyring to steal my woman,
Kunta Kente negro always hoverin'.
Black as night, naught but teeth can you see,
His game still at the line of scrimmage
Opportunist cat trying to defame me.

It's okay, it's cool you see
He'll never know the pleasure,
Of the smoothness of her thighs
Or that Reece's combination
That define Tina and me

And the battle continues.......

 

[ladyscorpio]

From the shadows MTL says her piece...lol

Damm you guys are really good! AristotlesOwn, Mcguyver you guys are proving that you are not only hung but have talented tongues

My sister is crazy am telling you.....

Sexy_Scorpio
I like how you fighting for your woman

Mcguyver counters

You call this a fight?
WTF, light skinned just ran out of luck.
When I'm done light skinned will be battered and bruised.
You and me baby, will go on a cruise.
When I get home everbody better duck.
Cause mcguyver's gonna run amuck.

 

[ladyscorpio]

Aww Mcguyver comes out hardcore

I'm gonna kick this off with a pray.

Dear God please forgive what I'm about to do.

Cause I'm about to massacre this light skinned dude.

You are a brave light brother I must say.

But Mcguver is about to ruin your day.

Your first poem I must admit was wack.

I was laughing so hard I almost caught a heart attack.

Oh shit, this fool slipped and bumped his head.

Some please call an ambulance, wait, call the cops instead.

I'm not gonna take that as an excuse.

This is about to get uglier than child abuse.

Its a well known fact dark skin is smooth and warm.

snuggling up to a cold, clammy, freckled, light skinned dude in a winter storm?

Let me translate your second poem son.

OH! NO, dark skinned took my girl she's gone, I'm done.

 

[ladyscorpio]

Cool Calm Collected AristotlesOwn saunters in

I see I gotta change the style a bit.... *ahem*



Let me put a simple verse down for the masses,

This cat is as black and thickheaded as molasses

Florida Evans called, she wants her face back pronto,

Jealous cause I'm the Lone Ranger and you're stuck as Tonto?

Just learned how combine two words yesterday,

Launching a verbal assault thinking he was ready to play.


I slay with iambic pentameter

My vernacular is spectacular

Sexy knows she's with a real master

When she saw your ass she ran away faster.


Your brain is clearly vacuous,

And I actually find it miraculous

How you found your way back to this

Thread so you could try to diss.

Sorry bruh, you have been dismissed


I hear you saying "Oh shit he kicked my ass"

That ain't how it happened, tell the truth, show a little class,

No need to walk away ashamed and disgraced

Man up friend, try to save some face.

It's all over playa, give up, face it,

Your time is up homie you got lambasted.

 

[shanebp1978]

Is there a difference between poetry, and battle rapping, in this instance???

 

[ladyscorpio]

So What you gonna do Mcguyver huh what you gonna do....he go murda dem

Look here fool I'm not impressed.

I can smell the bullshit on your breath.

They say oh his style is Artsy.

Artsy, Fartsy, your shit just plain sucks.

I have only one thing to say WTF!!

"I creep and i crawl", fool get off your knees.

I don't want to win this with such ease.

Ok you lost I can see that .

Lets step into my time machine I'll take you back.

Back to when Sexy scorpio saw light skinned was wack.

Remember the hug and when I grabbed her ass?

During the hug something grew really fast.

She whispered in my ear, " wow 10inches, Mcguyver you are the one for me."

I'm gonna divorce his ass real quick you'll see.

Then it'll just be you and me.

Lets go forward 2 days later.

Oh look, its you, signing the divorce papers.​

 

[ladyscorpio]

Izayoi pipes in

Some hot fire in here yall!

McGuyver coming back strong

Now the question is.....Where is AO??
Mcguyver thinks he may have gotten scared. Or perhaps he went to the library to look some new words.... time will only tell
Does Ari have what it takes to take Mcguyver down.
Is S. Scorpio playing them both? I mean she still gets both whats it gonna do to affect her right....HAHHA...silly boys..she wins either way...

Stay tuned as the battle may or may not continue...*Ari better come handle his bidness* lol

 

[ladyscorpio]

Is there a difference between poetry, and battle rapping, in this instance???

Rap is Rythm and Poetry so therefore it would not be different Shane. One person is feeding off of another's words. Are you wanting to battle?

 

[mcguyver]

Izayoi pipes in




Now the question is.....Where is AO??
Mcguyver thinks he may have gotten scared. Or perhaps he went to the library to look some new words.... time will only tell
Does Ari have what it takes to take Mcguyver down.
Is S. Scorpio playing them both? I mean she still gets both whats it gonna do to affect her right....HAHHA...silly boys..she wins either way...

Stay tuned as the battle may or may not continue...*Ari better come handle his bidness* lol

WTF???

 

[shanebp1978]

Rap is Rythm and Poetry so therefore it would not be different Shane. One person is feeding off of another's words. Are you wanting to battle?

Battle?

With these two sorry saps as the competition
like a broke BK breakfast combo, the croissant is missin
They should just stop, drop, and listen
Sexy S
more than lips and chest
Babe, forget these lames, let's logg on to ORBITZ, and hit the west
In a big body toy we can flip the rest
Don't unbutton, I'm a savage, I'll rip the dress

'Cause I hulk smash like Lou Ferrigno
Keep it hard like armadillo
No talking on the pillow,
3 hours and I still go, This is the full recording not a demo

How can that fake ass Mcgrubber be her suitor
Dude is midnight in the desert
can't even find the cooter
Aristotle, mouth full of baby bottle
His philosophy hollow
heard he was a fake ass handsome boy school model

Sexy S, you can find Shane in a honda accord
Smoken Ganja, I'm bored
Split like solomon's sword
An Empire to myself like the Ottoman shores

Shallow shane
all praise and only whisper the hallowed name

 

[ladyscorpio]

Battle?

With these two sorry saps as the competition
like a broke BK breakfast combo, the croissant is missin
They should just stop, drop, and listen
Sexy S
more than lips and chest
Babe, forget these lames, let's logg on to ORBITZ, and hit the west
In a big body toy we can flip the rest
Don't unbutton, I'm a savage, I'll rip the dress

'Cause I hulk smash like Lou Ferrigno
Keep it hard like armadillo
No talking on the pillow,
3 hours and I still go, This is the full recording not a demo

How can that fake ass Mcgrubber be her suitor
Dude is midnight in the desert
can't even find the cooter
Aristotle, mouth full of baby bottle
His philosophy hollow
heard he was a fake ass handsome boy school model

Sexy S, you can find Shane in a honda accord
Smoken Ganja, I'm bored
Split like solomon's sword
An Empire to myself like the Ottoman shores

Shallow shane
all praise and only whisper the hallowed name

Ohhh helll no...but yes he did...mcguyver and AO yall have a new fight on your hands and he didnt come soft....this was a slaughter.

Ladies and gents.. it has become a battle of one.
Is there no one to take him on. Or will Shane reign supreme.


Props Shane you killin it.

 

[shanebp1978]

Ohhh helll no...but yes he did...mcguyver and AO yall have a new fight on your hands and he didnt come soft....this was a slaughter.

Ladies and gents.. it has become a battle of one.
Is there no one to take him on. Or will Shane reign supreme.


Props Shane you killin it.

Well, I just happened to check my PMs . . . . and knew I was gonna Cum Hard.

 

[mcguyver]

Battle?

With these two sorry saps as the competition
like a broke BK breakfast combo, the croissant is missin
They should just stop, drop, and listen
Sexy S
more than lips and chest
Babe, forget these lames, let's logg on to ORBITZ, and hit the west
In a big body toy we can flip the rest
Don't unbutton, I'm a savage, I'll rip the dress

'Cause I hulk smash like Lou Ferrigno
Keep it hard like armadillo
No talking on the pillow,
3 hours and I still go, This is the full recording not a demo

How can that fake ass Mcgrubber be her suitor
Dude is midnight in the desert
can't even find the cooter
Aristotle, mouth full of baby bottle
His philosophy hollow
heard he was a fake ass handsome boy school model

Sexy S, you can find Shane in a honda accord
Smoken Ganja, I'm bored
Split like solomon's sword
An Empire to myself like the Ottoman shores

Shallow shane
all praise and only whisper the hallowed name

Shane sit the fuck down stop wasting my time.

I can take you out with one simple line.

I like your avatar, is he your concubine?

 

[ladyscorpio]

Well, I just happened to check my PMs . . . . and knew I was gonna Cum Hard.

and that you did

 

[ladyscorpio]

Shane sit the fuck down stop wasting my time.

I can take you out with one simple line.

I like your avatar, is he your concubine?

ohh shit....Mcguyver has decided to hit Shane with a 3 line little something....what will happen next....

how the hell would I know, I'm not a mind reader...merely a commentator....

 

[shanebp1978]

Shane sit the fuck down stop wasting my time.

I can take you out with one simple line.

I like your avatar, is he your concubine?

Concubine?
No
but your girl dresses like a Giesha when she rocks and whines
Dutty on my lap with her pop lock, on time
defeat with one line?
Kid, where did you drop your mind?

BGOL is a bar
Let's Stiff these lames, Northern sex slang stays crisp in rain
bring your umbrellas ladies I'm serving up a fifth of Shane

 

[AristotlesOwn]

The MOD squad is here, Shane will put you on punishment

But some might say he's really a Blunt instrument.

Oh no, I feel a BAN coming on,

Smellin strong, put that mess on your underarms.

 

[ladyscorpio]

Concubine?
No
but your girl dresses like a Giesha when she rocks and whines
Dutty on my lap with her pop lock, on time
defeat with one line?
Kid, where did you drop your mind?

BGOL is a bar
Let's Stiff these lames, Northern sex slang stays crisp in rain
bring your umbrellas ladies I'm serving up a fifth of Shane

Well it seems Mcguyver has thrown in the towel Shane could you be a winner of a battle not fought long...time will tell yes time will tell

 

[ladyscorpio]

The MOD squad is here, Shane will put you on punishment

But some might say he's really a Blunt instrument.

Oh no, I feel a BAN coming on,

Smellin strong, put that mess on your underarms.

HAHAHHA....wait Mod Squad



Ari you got me dying at this one. Love de play on words...

 

[shanebp1978]

The MOD squad is here, Shane will put you on punishment

But some might say he's really a Blunt instrument.

Oh no, I feel a BAN coming on,

Smellin strong, put that mess on your underarms.

So the enemy of my enemy is now my friend!
Both Mcbrubber and Ari-Style are all in
can one imagine a touch of more fouler sin
it's a good thing Shane has faced much wilder men


since your rap is average, you bring up my modding status
repeat that ancient BGOL adage:
" He who challenges mod gets out rapped "
I've buried better than you and your attack
It's dead poets society 6 feet under in my outback
See like the mob in vegas I got alot holes
See like the mob in vegas I got alot hoes
Mcguyver tried to buy respect but his soul got sold
Aristole opened his mouth and Harlem got showed

 

[Midnight Studio Comics]

man....should I..would I...This would make my murdathon count 156 to 1. Hmmm...


SAmple only of the war 2 come


S ilently slippin, my murda spits itchin in sadistic tension
H eated vision rippin n searin a love sick greek, I murked benson
A ri's da bitch guyver used RX on, stamina spinnin, a butt fuck mission
N
E

 

[femmenoire]

man....should I..would I...This would make my murdathon count 156 to 1. Hmmm...

Bring it MSC.

 

[mcguyver]

Ohhh helll no...but yes he did...mcguyver and AO yall have a new fight on your hands and he didnt come soft....this was a slaughter.

Ladies and gents.. it has become a battle of one.
Is there no one to take him on. Or will Shane reign supreme.


Props Shane you killin it.

Me throw in the towel? You don't know the half.

A passion for murdering faggots, I must admit I do have.

I see a sensitive one has joined the crew.

I''ll wait till they all gather together and drop a bomb or 2.

 

[WinstonX]

I don't know if you would call this a battle,

But the newibe is on deck with a new tale to rattle!

You see, I recall... thoughts of the night of that last full moon

Of passion fulfilled, which I yearn to again happen all too soon

As I moved between your burning, bare thighs

Lapping up the sweet essence of the smoldering sex before my eyes

I am overcome by the familiar musk tainted scent

Betraying your desire, and one true intent

To have me dislodge deep inside your womb

The prize of my liquid pearl, that! Which I struggled not to release too soon

So I release from the enveloping longing embrace your limbs have around my head

With reckless, quick, abandon, flipping you on your front side instead

Stopping just for a moment, with a chuckle to gaze at those full double ebony moons

As you arch your long curvy back, breathing in short gasps between lingering moans

Desperate with the anticipation

I enter!!!!!

Hmmm, you call to me, "BABY GO DEEP! No one loves me, desires me… as you do"

"Take me, and my sex, make me your wanton bitch through and through!"

I reply, "Girl don't worry, when I'm through isn't going to be no doubt"

"Who's this punani is, and who wears it out!"

Gripping those diminutive, full, woman-sized hips

I pull you up on your knees, moving my starving member back and forth, deep between those gripping lips

We call out each other's name, lost in pure, sun-scorching, animal-bliss

Loving the way we make love, the way we join together, the way we fit

And then comes the moment we reach our crescendo, the moment we end our sweet dance

As we collapsed in one incomprehensible explosion of delicious circumstance

Inclined, entwined, combined in total oneness, as we are in life

No need for any other pretenders, or lovers, only you my wife!

 

[Izayoi]

Battle?

With these two sorry saps as the competition
like a broke BK breakfast combo, the croissant is missin
They should just stop, drop, and listen
Sexy S
more than lips and chest
Babe, forget these lames, let's logg on to ORBITZ, and hit the west
In a big body toy we can flip the rest
Don't unbutton, I'm a savage, I'll rip the dress

'Cause I hulk smash like Lou Ferrigno
Keep it hard like armadillo
No talking on the pillow,
3 hours and I still go, This is the full recording not a demo

How can that fake ass Mcgrubber be her suitor
Dude is midnight in the desert
can't even find the cooter
Aristotle, mouth full of baby bottle
His philosophy hollow
heard he was a fake ass handsome boy school model

Sexy S, you can find Shane in a honda accord
Smoken Ganja, I'm bored
Split like solomon's sword
An Empire to myself like the Ottoman shores

Shallow shane
all praise and only whisper the hallowed name

The sheer rawness- I don't even know what to say!

Baby, he called you McGrubber

Shane sit the fuck down stop wasting my time.

I can take you out with one simple line.

I like your avatar, is he your concubine?

Short and sharp I like that!

So the enemy of my enemy is now my friend!
Both Mcbrubber and Ari-Style are all in
can one imagine a touch of more fouler sin
it's a good thing Shane has faced much wilder men

See I love how Shane did the ninja smack down Shakespeare style here!!!!!

Welcome MSC- I know my tomodachi MSC can spit, of that I have no doubt so to echo Femme bring it (with your fine self )

I don't know Lady S- Shane is straight hurricaning ninjas in here- leaving em soaked and displaced!

 

[Izayoi]

I don't know if you would call this a battle,

But the newibe is on deck with a new tale to rattle!

You see, I recall... thoughts of the night of that last full moon

Of passion fulfilled, which I yearn to again happen all too soon

As I moved between your burning, bare thighs

Lapping up the sweet essence of the smoldering sex before my eyes

I am overcome by the familiar musk tainted scent

Betraying your desire, and one true intent

To have me dislodge deep inside your womb

The prize of my liquid pearl, that! Which I struggled not to release too soon

So I release from the enveloping longing embrace your limbs have around my head

With reckless, quick, abandon, flipping you on your front side instead

Stopping just for a moment, with a chuckle to gaze at those full double ebony moons

As you arch your long curvy back, breathing in short gasps between lingering moans

Desperate with the anticipation

I enter!!!!!

Hmmm, you call to me, "BABY GO DEEP! No one loves me, desires me… as you do"

"Take me, and my sex, make me your wanton bitch through and through!"

I reply, "Girl don't worry, when I'm through isn't going to be no doubt"

"Who's this punani is, and who wears it out!"

Gripping those diminutive, full, woman-sized hips

I pull you up on your knees, moving my starving member back and forth, deep between those gripping lips

We call out each other's name, lost in pure, sun-scorching, animal-bliss

Loving the way we make love, the way we join together, the way we fit

And then comes the moment we reach our crescendo, the moment we end our sweet dance

As we collapsed in one incomprehensible explosion of delicious circumstance

Inclined, entwined, combined in total oneness, as we are in life

No need for any other pretenders, or lovers, only you my wife!

HOT Piece! Welcome Winston! I'd like to repost this into the About Love (fucking is included): Poetry thread cuz the ninjas in this thread are battling and not likely to pause to appreciate the sheer wet panty inducing quality of the above piece. I'll not repost it in the other thread unless I hear from you, so holla !

 

[SEXY_SCORPIO]

OMG!! I cant breathe,I cant breathe,lmao.Damn you twin

 

[WinstonX]

Izayoi,

No problem, thanks for the compliment and thanks also for th welcome!

 

[Izayoi]

Izayoi,

No problem, thanks for the compliment and thanks also for th welcome!

Thanks bra, it's done! Nice to have another poet/rhymer in the house.

Peace.

 

[SinaminDelite]

This thread is hilarious! Guyver, Ari, Shane, and MSC are really doing the damn thing; but I know who I have my money on
BTW Winston, that poem was a panty-dropper. Can't wait to see more of your work.

 

[Raptor ES]

While you guys battle with each other for the title of poem king,
Im going to round up the girls with a glimpse of an engagement ring.


With all this fighting going on It feels like a boxing ring,
Ponder this, these women want more then a fling.


Time for me to move on, duty calls you see,
Ladies here is a little something for free....

It’s just a matter of time.



There was a time, you had no need for rhythm or rhyme
The world seemed so wild and so free, just wrap yourself up in a dream
All you had to do was believe, and nothing was out of your reach
So sure how it all falls in line, it’s just a matter of time

Then you woke up one day, all your dreams somehow faded away
The road that you followed it turned, can’t find where the fire once burned
Can’t look yourself in the eye, in your heart of hearts you know you compromised
Baby we all cross that line, it’s just a matter of time

All alone in the still of the night you come face to face with your fight
And how much you wanted it all, can’t believe how you’ve taken the fall
Then you reach out one day, to the light of a new dawning day
You take just one small grain of sand right into the palm of your hand
And maybe you find in the end you’re able to dream once again
And baby you fall back in line, it’s just a matter of time​

 

[ladyscorpio]

Well well well....it seems we have some new players in the game
MSC came forward to let us have only a sample *on a side note* I'd like to sample his wares damn sexy ass lips....ummmmmm....yeah so where was I again....ohhh yes

There is a battle afoot and MSC has joined the fray. Shane I think he tryna tell you sumptin...
Izayoi Shane has murdered dem straight up and brought nothing but fire can no one stop this massacre???

Mcguyver waltz back in to let us know that his ass will be back to straight up bomb all yall

Winston X damn it I need to wipe that up.......uhhmmm i mean....
and please feel free to battle, it all in fun yes. if you mean to drop just wordsound then link Izayoi's place of bidness, in here its about love too but the rough kind, you know the one that you have to take.....uhmm am gonna stop now

Raptor dats niceness bredren.....now fight damn it....nah really its was niceness




Now I hope that these fellows noticed how my twin I wont call her name last name Scorpio do de math...lol had jumped into this joint and straight up laughed at yall...
You know that she means that you guys can do better that this right? She crazy like that. Imagine having to grow up with her trust me I know.
You guys gonna let her laugh it up everytime? Shameful man just shameful.

SinD we betting?? hehehe let the games begin boys the ladies are watching



Peace

 

[SEXY_SCORPIO]

Girl, do not get me in trouble.I was laughing at you. I love the words Ari,Shane, and Guyver are writing.Pay my sis no attention yall

 

[shanebp1978]

Winston
Listen,
I have a sneaking suspicion that's
previously written
thought this was on relevant subject freestyle spittin?

Raptor ES we see the sucker in you
why you suck at this dude
why not Read Midnight a comic and tuck him in too!
ya'll both need rest, 'cause fuck it your through
Scorp Sexy
With Writtens like that, tell 'em fire they're muse
the words are not only tired, their commononly used,
admit
your quietly amused
That being said, I'm sure a higher road you'll choose

'cause your crazy, Swayze
like the wind
Don't play me, baby
I like to sin
Hey, maybe, lady you'll get nasty when
you decide to slay me, hay me and ask me in
and after then

. . . don't forget to relate the romp to your moderating sassy twin

'Cause nothing sells the product like word of mouth
Tell her how the neighbors heard you scream n shout
Tell her how you came with the whine and pout
Tell her how you felt empty when I pulled it out
The hidden dragon doggy style with the tiger crouch

 

[ladyscorpio]

Girl, do not get me in trouble.I was laughing at you. I love the words Ari,Shane, and Guyver are writing.Pay my sis no attention yall

Sis now you know I love you too, but uhmm why you laughing at me

So it seems the divorce has AO done and out for the count Ari. how you gonna let Mcguyver take you out like that i mean c'mon now



Shane she better not forget to tell me... six million ways to die...choose one.....hahha its pure bashment in the place ladies and gents. This battle needs more fire to fuel it on.
Remember boys there are 75 roll called females in this joint. Shane's planning his own 75 plus 1 party what yall gonna do about that?




Peace