****What the most well written lyrics you've ever heard in a song?****

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If I hear 'ride or die' in a song again I don't know what I'll do. :(

How come songs are so shotily written nowadays?

Poetic songs like What becomes of the broken-hearted, Tears of a Cown, After the love is gone, Inside My Love, etc. are gone.

By the way, what do songwriters make nowadays and how is it broken down?

If it's a simple song ( Give me one Reason by Tracy Chapman ) where two, three lyrics but it's a big hit, how does that differ from longer songs?
 
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I'ma prison cell six by nine
Livin hell stone wall metal bars for the gods in jail
My nickname the can, the slammer, the big house
I'm the place many fear cause there's no way out
I take the sun away put misery instead
When you wit me most folks consider you dead
I saw too many inmates fallin apart
Call for the gods and let them out when it's dark
Convicts think they alone but if they listen close
They can hear me groan touch the wall feel my pulse
All the pictures you put up is stuck to my skin
I hear ya prayers (even when ya whisperin)
I make it hotter in the summer colder in the winter
If the court paroal ya then another con enters
No remorse for your tears I seen em too often
When you cry I make you feel alive inside a coffin
Watch you when you eat play with you mind when you sleep
Make you dream that you free then make you wake up to me
Face to face with a cage no matter your age
I can shatter you turn you into a savage in rage
Change ya life that's if you get a chance to get out
Cause only you and I know what sufferings about
Yo it's stunning when bed sheets become your woman
And I'm the one that gotcha weapons when the beef is comming
Maybe one day I'll open up my arms to release you
You'll always be my property nigga stay legal

Who said Nastradamus was wack back in the day???
 
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Breathe - by Pink Floyd

Breathe, breathe in the air.
Don't be afraid to care.
Leave but don't leave me.
Look around and choose your own ground.

Long you live and high you fly
And smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry
And all you touch and all you see
Is all your life will ever be.


Run, rabbit run.
Dig that hole, forget the sun,
And when at last the work is done
Don't sit down it's time to dig another one.

For long you live and high you fly
But only if you ride the tide
And balanced on the biggest wave
You race towards an early grave.
 
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Genius, if written by a 5 year old. :smh:
 
femmenoire said:
Genius, if written by a 5 year old. :smh:
Ok, ok you didnt like that one. How bout this lyric?


Let It Rain. And Clear It Out
Let It Rain. And Clear It Out
Let It Rain. And Clear It Out
Let It Rain. And Clear It Out

And Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It



Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side




 
Rap-
1.)tupac Dear Mama

*Git up Git out Cee lo's verse (personal favorite)

R&B-
1.)Ribbon in the Sky -Stevie Wonder

2.) Lady- written by Lionel Richie
 
I was always partial to Just My Imagination-Temptations

Many of Maxwell's lyrics

And Stevie Wonder's song 'As(Always)
 
redsox said:
Ok, ok you didnt like that one. How bout this lyric?




Let It Rain. And Clear It Out

Let It Rain. And Clear It Out
Let It Rain. And Clear It Out
Let It Rain. And Clear It Out

And Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It
Lets Get It



Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side

Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Chicken Noodle Soup
Wit A Soda On The Side




Yeah that's a classic right there.

I love Stevie Wonder's "Knocks Me Off My Feet".
 
Say what you want about Michael, but dude kbows how to make a ballad.

Tell the angels no, I dont wanna leave my baby alone
I dont want nobody else to hold you
Thats a chance Ill take
Baby Ill stay, heaven can wait
No, if the angels took me from this earth
I would tell them bring me back to her
Its a chance Ill take, maybe Ill stay
Heaven can wait
 
9X3inch said:
How come songs are so shotily written nowadays?

Poetic songs like What becomes of the broken-hearted, Tears of a Cown, After the love is gone, Inside My Love, etc. are gone.

That's such a (typically) ludicrous generalization. You're hardly qualified to judge the general quality of songs. It's not like you hear everything. Folks like you have mocked songwriting in every generation.

How great a lyric was,

"A-B-C
Easy as 1-2-3" ???

Still a classic.
 
femmenoire said:
Yeah that's a classic right there.

I love Stevie Wonder's "Knocks Me Off My Feet".


You really can't go wrong with Stevie, and(9x3inch) "Never Can say Goodbye" and "Got to be there" was the shit from little Michael Jackson
 
Check out Lupe fiasco's song "Twilight Zone"
He goes on Nas's "Thief's Theme" instrumental and he raps about the hood in a "Alice In Wonderland" sense. ITS CRAZY.
 
I would say i guy call Vibes Kartel , when he say Jusus has 12 desiple but he has 24 , and he go on to tell you his guns , luga, caleco, smith and weston, ingram, etc, till he came up with 24 guns
 
9X3inch said:
If I hear 'ride or die' in a song again I don't know what I'll do. :(

How come songs are so shotily written nowadays?

Poetic songs like What becomes of the broken-hearted, Tears of a Cown, After the love is gone, Inside My Love, etc. are gone.

By the way, what do songwriters make nowadays and how is it broken down?

If it's a simple song ( Give me one Reason by Tracy Chapman ) where two, three lyrics but it's a big hit, how does that differ from longer songs?
The lack of good song writers is the main reason why Old School music is now in such high demand today and why many groups have either one hit song or album and then disappear. Creative writers have become as hard to find as virgins in a maternity ward. :rolleyes:
 
Blunt said:
That's such a (typically) ludicrous generalization. You're hardly qualified to judge the general quality of songs. It's not like you hear everything. Folks like you have mocked songwriting in every generation.

How great a lyric was,

"A-B-C
Easy as 1-2-3" ???

Still a classic.

How about listening to the whole song, cunt. It was a catchy tune. And when you have a library of 'I'll Be There', 'Maybe Tommorow', 'The Love You Save', 'Got To Be There', etc. you can afford to be cute.
 
Gotta respect the phat tongue style of "Kool G Rap."When I heard the song straight jacket. I realized what rap can be. The continuous rhyme busting with sporadic breathing took rap to a whole new level. As far as I'm concerned. The only other rapper that even came close was Big Mike who was with the Ghetto Boyz.

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Help me doctor doctor cause I'm seein lots of spots
I'm thinkin of pink elephants with little polka dots
I'm tired, crazy tired, but I can not get no sleep
Cause every time I close my eyes I think I'm six feet deep
I feel I'm goin slow as hell but everything is speedin
Last night I woke up screamin and my bathroom walls were bleedin
I thought I fell asleep at work, but then when I awoke
I was all alone and had my own hands on my throat
Clippings from the newspaper of murders my library
Sometimes I get a urge to walk inside a cemetary
I looked into a mirror seen a rope around my neck
I smoked a lot of cigarettes, cause I'm a nervous wreck
Tryin to relax, I ran some water in the tub
Vision somebody slaughtered, then the water turned to blood
I'm runnin down the hallway tryin to reach an exit door
The more and more I run seems like it's further than before
Voices sometimes tell me what I won't do, what I will do
Voices in my head right now are tellin me to kill you
Filled up with anxiety, I went to Lover's Lane
Seen a couple kissin, then blew out the brother's brain
I feel the world's against me and the women are so dirty
I hate women today because my mother used to hurt me
I think I'm goin crazy Doc no longer can I hack it
Please, doctor please, put me in a straight jacket
A lady picked me up hitchikin, what a big mistake
Several hours later, there's a body by the lake
Walked into a train station, headed towards the back
Caught a flashback, and pushed a man right on the track
I'm in my darkroom inside my house that is deserted
developin the photo of a hoe that I just murdered
I took a walk one night because I wanted to get out
I stepped outside, I paused, and I was back inside my house
Called up PLENTY doctors, told em all about my health
My phone just plays a dial tone, I'm talkin to myself
Snap back to reality, at least that's what I thought
Runnin from the spirits of the bodies I just caught
I can't escape this hell I'm in, not even in my dreams
I cover both my ears, because I'm sick of hearin screams
I been a mental case since I was in the seventh grade
Stabbed another student, licked his blood off of my blade
I got two personalities inside sometimes they battle
When I look at my picture all I see is scribble scrabble
I feel I'm really losin it, I need to write to Abby
The characters on TV try to reach right out and grab me
I always hear somebody talkin bout they gonna do me
But I listen again and it's those voices talkin to me
You heard of shadowboxin? I see mine and then attack it
Please, doctor please, put me in a straight jacket
 
9X3inch said:
If I hear 'ride or die' in a song again I don't know what I'll do. :(

How come songs are so shotily written nowadays?

Poetic songs like What becomes of the broken-hearted, Tears of a Cown, After the love is gone, Inside My Love, etc. are gone.

By the way, what do songwriters make nowadays and how is it broken down?

If it's a simple song ( Give me one Reason by Tracy Chapman ) where two, three lyrics but it's a big hit, how does that differ from longer songs?

Songwriters are paid through publishing, and mechanical royalties

Song is played on the radio, paid, tv ad, paid, tv, paid, movie, paid, restaurant, paid. Split 50/50 (or what ever the deal is) with the publisher.
 
Ice Ice Baby by Vanillia Ice. That song is a masterpiece. Despite what happend to the guys he kinda help brought hip hop to the mainstream during it's baby stages. In fact his exposure to the public(before he fall off real hard) helped saved hip hop from becoming a fad/distinction!!!!!!! :yes:
 
Hote California

.....The Eagles

This verse is about cocaine and addiction


Mirrors on the ceiling
Pink champagne on ice
And she said
We are all just prisoners here
Of our own device
And in the master's chambers
They gathered for the feast
They stab it with their steely knives
But they just can't kill the beast
Last thing I remember
I was running for the door
I had to find the passage back to the place I was before
Relax said the nightman
We are programed to recieve
You can check out any time you like
But you can never leave
 
the whole dam song.....


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9X3inch said:
If I hear 'ride or die' in a song again I don't know what I'll do. :(

How come songs are so shotily written nowadays?

Poetic songs like What becomes of the broken-hearted, Tears of a Cown, After the love is gone, Inside My Love, etc. are gone.

By the way, what do songwriters make nowadays and how is it broken down?

If it's a simple song ( Give me one Reason by Tracy Chapman ) where two, three lyrics but it's a big hit, how does that differ from longer songs?
What type of lyrics are you talking about? Judging from the titles you posted I thought you we're talking about R&B? :confused: :confused: :confused:
 
Yo, I'm quite single, and occaisionally I mingle
But aside from all the rest, she sparks my interest
No, ma'am, I don't know you
Just offering the common respect I feel I owe you
Also, some conversation, companionship, common-ground and common-sense
There's no such thing as coincidence in, me finding you here
And I really hate screaming in your ear, so some other time, OK?
I waited a day *phone rings* Hello?
This is Carlito from a couple of days ago, you sound tired
Forgive me if I've called you too late
But what better time to relate mind-state? Where could I begin?
Hasn't anyone ever told you you got beautiful skin?
You're more than welcome, what do you desire within?
I just, wanna be, there's no need to put titles on you and me
Those are limitations, living and learning are our only obligations
Equality, honesty, independence, intelligence, emotion and devotion
Humbly seeking to hear God when he's speaking
At one time, my mind, just, couldn't conceive
A woman had to dress a certain way to believe
But, in the same breath, a-llow me to say
That, if you believed young lady, you wouldn't dress that way
And I, was attracted to your class, I couldn't see all yo' ass
And, I was very content, and you deserved every complement
Now, remember our indifferences make us the same
You gotta have some game, or, many of you
won't even be able to take care of yourself, uh
And Love, when I look at you, I see my reflection
So I offer my love, affection and protection
Shawty, you dead fine, but the bottom-line is
You're still my sister


Cee-Lo Gree in
Beautiful Skin
Goodie Mobb
Still Standing


NUF SAID!
 
R&B
So Amazing - Luther Vandross
You & I - Jodeci
I Luv U - Boyz II Men
Fairweather Friend - Johnny Gill

Rap
It will Neva Happen Again - KAM
Brenda's Got a Baby - Pac
Any of Ice Cube's early shit
 
redsox said:
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Dat laffy taffy
Shake dat laffy taffy
Dat laffy taffy
Gurl shake dat laffy taffy
Dat laffy taffy
Dat laffy taffy (candy gurl)
Dat laffy taffy
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" i hope you dont mind " by gay ass elton john. this song makes me think about my daughter everytime i listen to it.

It's a little bit funny this feeling inside
I'm not one of those who can easily hide
I don't have much money but boy if I did
I'd buy a big house where we both could live

If I was a sculptor, but then again, no
Or a man who makes potions in a travelling show
I know it's not much but it's the best I can do
My gift is my song and this one's for you

And you can tell everybody this is your song
It may be quite simple but now that it's done
I hope you don't mind
I hope you don't mind that I put down in words
How wonderful life is while you're in the world


I sat on the roof and kicked off the moss
Well a few of the verses well they've got me quite cross
But the sun's been quite kind while I wrote this song
It's for people like you that keep it turned on

So excuse me forgetting but these things I do
You see I've forgotten if they're green or they're blue
Anyway the thing is what I really mean
Yours are the sweetest eyes I've ever seen
 
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