BGOL Writing Contest #5: Revenge/Payback Story. Enter Here

Damn. Wish I would have seen this earlier.

The deadline isn't until tomorrow at midnight. You have almost two full days to get down a max of 3000 words. It doesn't even have to be that much. As far as a topic, take a news story that you recently heard of, like that woman who had her baby killed. Have her lie and say that she doesn't know how did it and have her hunt the dudes down.

You can do it!!!
 
27 hours til the deadline. Good luck, everybody. I received one submission already.
 
I am bowing out, I did not like the direction my story was taking me so I stopped writing at about a 3rd of it.

Matter of fact I am so troubled by what I wrote that I am considering seeking professional help.
 
I am bowing out, I did not like the direction my story was taking me so I stopped writing at about a 3rd of it.

Matter of fact I am so troubled by what I wrote that I am considering seeking professional help.

Listen man, I say you finish anyway. Do the damn Thing. It is about tohe practice more than anything else. You need to practice, As I do, everybody short of Stephen King does. that's the level that I'm trying to get to.

It was contest like this 4 years ago that I entered on a whim. I have been written since high school and I hadn't been to college yet. Someone wrote that theyI saw huge potential in my writing and that I should keep at it. My first story, I read it today and was like wow, my growth was like night and day from then until now.

Come on brother, stay with us.
 
I really wanted to be the first to bow so I could be all dramatic about it. Oh well. I'm out. Still gonna finish condensing and editing the story when I have time, but it's not polished enough for the contest.

To that end though I'm gonna be extra fucking brutal with the stories that ARE submitted, just to be a bastard. :angry:

I kid, I kid. Get em in fam. I'm anxious to read!
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It seems like a bunch of folks are in need on an extension so how about next Monday at Midnight. Nobody needs to bow out. I only got done because I was working on it at the job at my cubicle like the dude in The Avengers playing Galaga

 
Multiple folks requested more time so more time it is. One more week. So on April Fools of all days is the day that these things will be due. Take your time, re-read, send to friends and give them a chance to read/make suggestions/spot errors and then come back next Monday and lets do the thing.

I can't wait to read the submissions. I had a damned blast writing mine, and like I said, I wrote mine at work for a couple of days (lunch times/break times were utilized...plus a lil bit more), and I am only taking one day in school. I understand that folks are busy, and we want to accommodate everyone and give everyone a chance to get their stuff right without having to rush.
 
I should not have read this lol, I was writing like a madman trying to finish before midnight. Now I feel like slacking off :smh:

Nah I will continue lol Thanks for the extension.
 
I should not have read this lol, I was writing like a madman trying to finish before midnight. Now I feel like slacking off :smh:

Nah I will continue lol Thanks for the extension.

You should still try to get it finished asap Because proofreading and editing take time.
 
I needed one more day to get mine done too. Thanks for the extra time.

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Done but I busted way over 3000 words which I did not expect to :confused:

Time for some serious cutting down...
 
Done but I busted way over 3000 words which I did not expect to :confused:

Time for some serious cutting down...

It is tough, which is why I love MS Word's word counter at the bottom of the screen. Remember the old days when you had to do word counter?

Yeah I've been editing mine for a week getting it under, it's tough cutting your baby. Each word means something. Tell you what - hold on to the extended version so you can post it afterwards, that way we can see it like the Deleted Scenes of the movies. I'll even post it next to the link with the 3000 words after the voting is done.

Not just for you, DS, but for everybody. If you find that your story ran long, keep a version of the long story and after the voting is completed I will post it side by side with your story so we can see whether the extra stuff would have mattered or not like with the movies. I'd be kinda cool. I love watching deleted scenes from movies and saying, "Awww, man. I wish they would have kept that one in," or, "Shit, they were smart to leave that out."
 
It is tough, which is why I love MS Word's word counter at the bottom of the screen. Remember the old days when you had to do word counter?

Yeah I've been editing mine for a week getting it under, it's tough cutting your baby. Each word means something. Tell you what - hold on to the extended version so you can post it afterwards, that way we can see it like the Deleted Scenes of the movies. I'll even post it next to the link with the 3000 words after the voting is done.

Not just for you, DS, but for everybody. If you find that your story ran long, keep a version of the long story and after the voting is completed I will post it side by side with your story so we can see whether the extra stuff would have mattered or not like with the movies. I'd be kinda cool. I love watching deleted scenes from movies and saying, "Awww, man. I wish they would have kept that one in," or, "Shit, they were smart to leave that out."

Yeah good idea, will do so!
 
Alright, today is the day. below is how to submit the stories. The email to submit the stories to is BGOLsubmissions@yahoo.com or you can pm them to me. No need to use RAR if you use the email route to submit.

You can upload your story with any file hosting site.

A question was posed to me of how people were to submit their stories to me. The easiest way is to bundle the Microsoft Word document in an rar file, use www.rapidgator.com free upload host and send me the link. From there I will use the word document to convert the format to www.freetexthost.com and a PDF document. DO NOT only send me a PDF because some times when you convert the PDF to word it has errors and I want to use freetexthost for accessibility to everyone's sake. Before I post the freetexthost or PDF links I will send it to each contestant so they can verify that it looks as they sent it (it took me a couple of days last time because of format translation issues).
 
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Damn....I could not even settle on an idea for my fucking story. I started with one concept I that seemed good at the time, but I ended up hating it.
 
Damn....I could not even settle on an idea for my fucking story. I started with one concept I that seemed good at the time, but I ended up hating it.

Pick a story of the news man. Your brother of somebody who got killed in a drive by. The storeis are out there man. Your boss fired you for no reason. Come on playa, I am for you to come up with something come on yo we need you. Help me, Genecisco-wan kenobi, you're our only hope.

Any submission is better than no submission.
 
Pick a story of the news man. Your brother of somebody who got killed in a drive by. The storeis are out there man. Your boss fired you for no reason. Come on playa, I am for you to come up with something come on yo we need you. Help me, Genecisco-wan kenobi, you're our only hope.

Any submission is better than no submission.

I just couldn't settle on an idea with an original spin. I think I was trying too hard to make it something too unique.
 
Can we extend the deadline a little bit? I'm trying to trim my story down and re-arrange some things.
 
How much time do y'all need, for real? Wednesday night? I only have 4 submissions.
 
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