ANY GIVEN SUNDAY. Shane Vs Mcguyver

Who got the skill to kill


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Now so far the judes will be Lady scorpio, sexy scorppio, cleo, watchin and justazz, and those who are battling. YOU CANNOT VOTE FOR YOURSELF.


I will be responsible for the numbers. Pick a number btwn 1-30 the battlers whose numbers are closest will pair. Example: If I pick 6, andey picks 9 and no one else is closer then we pair off. Oh and post the numbers so we can all see.

Like Andey suggested 2 rhymes per topic, minimum 8bars, there is no maximum bars. 24hrs to respond to the topic, each pair will have their own thread and poll. So If onxy and shane is battling they will have their own thread with a poll. If there are 8 people battling there should be 4 threads. Sol about to come alive.

24hrs to respond is counted from the first rhyme in that battle is dropped.

Throw scorp a number btwn 1-30 via pm.

If there is a tie both battlers move on to the next round.

Once winner is decided start process over again.



Your topic>>>>>>. Any Given Sunday (i.e. tell how you can beat your opponent on any day of the week)


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Yall both KNOW how I like it yes :angry:
I don't have to ask yall to do it dirty do I? :hmm:



guyver you know Shane say he always better than you ANY TIME any PLACE ANY where....:hmm:
 
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Any given sunday?
wonder why they call Wednesday hump day?
I woke up fuked the world and began to spray.
No mattter if its a friday or monday
this will only end one way.
you on a highway to heaven.
The rules forgot to mention
you up against one of god's greatest creations.
Now you've got a problem
don't bother to stop breathing cause I aint stoppin
I will stomp your ass straight through your coffin
Mcguyver's the people's choice
I'd drop a verse that would make Maya Angelou moist.
Shane you can't win
The heat seekers are armed and locked onto these coordinates.......finish him.
 
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I couldn't wait
to ride this thread black horse and hoooded cape
Because I'm a discriminator with heart full of hate
tempt fate
I solicit for collection
MC I wouldn't bait
In lieu of payment your flesh suit will be draped
your reputation is cake
respect for your font is most often faked
Your eulogy will not be given but played, 4 in anticipation this episode of, " FAIL " was previously taped
You shall not pass, I Gandalf this shit and can never be shaked
battling me is the measure of a fool
I fight dirty,
NEVER accepting of a rule
Against your spine I use a severing tool, this lesson is better then school
The curricula will instruct you humility
For Pride is mine alone so sayeth Shane
Any Sabbath can be a day of fun and pain
Mcguvyer your meager cries and tears earn no mercy when washed away with thunder and rain
This is Lion's Den, UNDER my REIGN


Written to - DMX " My Niggaz " which appeared on the Any given Sunday Soundtrack. :cool:

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7 days I'm suited up in battle gear
No shoulder pads or helmets here
this aint a game and this aint a movie
I suggest you give up this fantasy of hanging with me
I've got this game on lock and swallowed the key
Your reign is haunted by war cries
of a warrior with thunder bolts for eyes
One man army deep but you would swear it was 6 figures when I walk by
heaven's gates parts and dark clouds disperse when I spit a verse
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse
make sure you pay your tithes to me first
fuk church stay home and rehearse
cause you rhymes lost in translation
every word you spit leads a path to this premonition
Mcguyver hovers levels you can't imagine
these ninjas hoping, praying, wishing I would take a vacation
Monday you'll wake up to a challenging situation
your week is short
By Thursday you'll be in the morgue
a victim of your own accord
heed my warnings or pull a balancing act on the end of my sword.
hurry ninja pull the rip cord
Bail before I light this blunt with your charred remains
after I piss on you to put out the flames.
Its Wednesday Now look I know you in your room pacing
wonder how you got into this predicament
knowing what you up against, what you about to be facing.
wondering if you should lock yourself in the basement.
while you heart beat is racing

Stay away from the windows its killa thursday the infra-red beams are tracing
And If there is any doubt ninja
Check the lines in red, I switched up....I'm styling on ya.




Oh and I wrote this to the beat of your head hitting the pavement. :cool:
 
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7 days I'm suited up in battle gear
No shoulder pads or helmets here
this aint a game and this aint a movie
I suggest you give up this fantasy of hanging with me
I've got this game on lock and swallowed the key
Your reign is haunted by war cries
of a warrior with thunder bolts for eyes
One man army deep but you would swear it was 6 figures when I walk by
heaven's gates parts and dark clouds disperse when I spit a verse
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse
make sure you pay your tithes to me first
fuk church stay home and rehearse
cause you rhymes lost in translation
every word you spit leads a path to this premonition
Mcguyver hovers levels you can't imagine
these ninjas hoping, praying, wishing I would take a vacation
Monday you'll wake up to a challenging situation
your week is short
By Thursday you'll be in the morgue
a victim of your own accord
heed my warnings or pull a balancing act on the end of my sword.
hurry ninja pull the rip cord
Bail before I light this blunt with your charred remains
after I piss on you to put on the flames.
Its Wednesday Now look I know you in your room pacing
wonder how you got into this predicament
knowing what you up against, what you about to be facing.
wondering if you should lock yourself in the basement.
while you heart beat is racing

Stay away from the windows its killa thursday the infra-red beams are tracing
And If there is any doubt ninja
Check the lines in red, I switched up....I'm styling on ya.




Oh and I wrote this to the beat of your head hitting the pavement. :cool:

Hmmmmmmmmmmm...
 
On casual murder Fridays
I slay
Mcees lay
During the commute on the side of the highway
West coast whorider hold my mic sideways
it was a hopeful audacity to think that I'd play while on my way
to get my glove and mask for the Tuesday Tie up
Where McGuyver gets his eye bucked with the discernible impact force of four five trucks
Yes.
Reading his style is like 7 days of weak
Shane pile bodies like 7 days a week
mics found in garbage bins under trains and creeks
I'ma Barack landslide this with out a famous speech
On the day Wendz.
I punish MCees for their previous sins
precede to check chins
Style on 'em for the win
Hump day get their girls to bend
Never butt ass nekkid I even fuck in my tims
So I can get up early when my Monday begins
Staying two steps ahead as McGuyver follows my trendz
Against my Thorday hammer there is no defends hence Mcees started fucking wearing depends
On a Sunday
any given
don't challenge Shane if you into liven
'Cause I'm into winning and women in tight ass denim who are into sinning after church
It's a shame how your sister got that work
On the other hand I'm loving your momma's twist n twerk
On any Sunday given your playing Shawn Puffy Combs with a manbag in a skirt

on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse

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You just pulled a Plaxico
Bringing that weak shit to a SSFU Saturday rap show
I got that Marcus De-Ware Sack Flow
Like Strathan MCees be-ware wack hoe
you an impulsive apprentice like Brad from season 2 You'll never Stack dough
With shame and head low
You out the Lion's Den
Exit from the back do-ow


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Aight this battle is done get your votes in. Bigirl's doesn't count she aint a judge and I dunno about owl's he voted when shane dropped his first rhyme. Shane and others are itching to move forward so get your votes and rymes in. Remember vote only when 4 rhymes 2 from each battler is up.
 
I thought I had posted in here???

Aight I think for McGuyver going first he started off ok. I think he was feeling Shane out, but I'm not sure why he did that when he already knew a few things about Shane from the jump. He knew Shane would come in hard as he did, but he didn't go in for the kill.

Second round was all Shane though. Shane looked like he was itching to drop that rhyme and he used a few flaws (overlooked maybe???) in McG's rhyme to solidify the point and bring it home.

I thought McG had him there for a minute with the second verse but point goes to Shane. :yes:
 
I give Shane a slight upper hand with first verse, it wasn't his all out, but i understand that both of them where planning on a "UUU WEEE" gut clencher. Shane is more wit than grit, so even when he says whoride hold his mic sideways, it comes off as humorous...something for everybody to look out for...
 
I relaxed the first was really trying to get the battle moving. But the second I'm lost with the flaws comment
 
I relaxed the first was really trying to get the battle moving. But the second I'm lost with the flaws comment

The shiny suit and wearing a purse comment. I know you meant to tie that in to Shane but you kind of left it wide open so he could turn around and use it against you. Read through it again and when you get to that line you will see what I mean.

That's where the whole "man purse" thing he was talking about came from. :yes:
 
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse
make sure you pay your tithes to me first





:dunno: I wrote it so maybe thats why I don't see what you do.

:smh: something told me to punctuate
 
The shiny suit and wearing a purse comment. I know you meant to tie that in to Shane but you kind of left it wide open so he could turn around and use it against you. Read through it again and when you get to that line you will see what I mean.

That's where the whole "man purse" thing he was talking about came from. :yes:


That's why he said,"YOU PLAXED YOURSELF"
 
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse
make sure you pay your tithes to me first





:dunno: I wrote it so maybe thats why I don't see what you do.

:smh: something told me to punctuate

Put the line above it in now re-read...

heaven's gates parts and dark clouds disperse when I spit a verse
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse

make sure you pay your tithes to me first

Do you see it now. Take those three lines and isolate them and you have a problem. :yes:
 
Put the line above it in now re-read...

heaven's gates parts and dark clouds disperse when I spit a verse
on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse

make sure you pay your tithes to me first

Do you see it now. Take those three lines and isolate them and you have a problem. :yes:


Naw

I don't why would I be going to church and telling him to pay tithes to me?
 
Naw

I don't why would I be going to church and telling him to pay tithes to me?

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:lol:

Aight read it this way.

Heaven's gates parts and dark clouds disperse when I spit a verse on sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse.

Make sure you pay your tithes to me first.

Get it now? :dunno:

So the gates part and the clouds disperse when YOU are spitting a verse on Sunday while dressed in a shiny suit and carrying a purse.

So he should pay his tithes to YOU as you described yourself above. Get me???
 
:lol: @ this linguistics course. Ima start inserting foot notes and a bibliography after my rhyme. Ibid, bar 4, line 1. Can't take any chances ...
 
:lol: @ this linguistics course. Ima start inserting foot notes and a bibliography after my rhyme. Ibid, bar 4, line 1. Can't take any chances ...

:lol:

Nah. He didn't mean for it to come out this way but I noticed it immediately when I read it but I wasn't going to just give it away to shane.
 
This was tough. Actually I thought the closest to a tie I've read yet. Mc's first I could definitely see he was holding back. I did love that Maya Angelou line tho! Shane's first rhyme was clean and deadly if not a bit reserved too. Where the battle really took place was the second verses. Mc came hard initially, the ending seemed to lose steam tho. Same thing actually happened with Shane's. The second verse was a bit too long and imo didnt need the added gifs or vids. They were more distractions than additions. Where he won it for me was the sheer creativity. (obama, sinning sexy women and Thor? Wow)
 
I think both held back a bit during the first round...I didn't pay attention to Shane's gimmicks with the youtube vids because that's kinda reserved for another topic, but I let that slide. I just think the deciding factor was not in the last two verses because I feel like those two were neck and neck with imagery and metaphors, but it mostly lies with the decision being made on the verses from the first round. Shane came a tad bit harder than Mc, and that's what decided it for me.

I also think Mc confused a few people in his content from his last rhyme and that's probably what threw a lot of people off and made them put their decision in for Shane.

I kind of feel now, that there should have been three rhymes per competition or vs. battle...that way the contestants could feel out the topic a bit better.

I also feel that people will speculate too much on who went first and not focus in on the fact that both rhymes are not related to each other as far as flowing off of material used...

One last thing, PLEASE people, PLEASE, do not vote off of popularity and biases...I Have a slight feeling like that is what is happening unfortunately :smh:

This was a very good battle.
 
I think both held back a bit during the first round...I didn't pay attention to Shane's gimmicks with the youtube vids because that's kinda reserved for another topic, but I let that slide. I just think the deciding factor was not in the last two verses because I feel like those two were neck and neck with imagery and metaphors, but it mostly lies with the decision being made on the verses from the first round. Shane came a tad bit harder than Mc, and that's what decided it for me.

I also think Mc confused a few people in his content from his last rhyme and that's probably what threw a lot of people off and made them put their decision in for Shane.

I kind of feel now, that there should have been three rhymes per competition or vs. battle...that way the contestants could feel out the topic a bit better.

I also feel that people will speculate too much on who went first and not focus in on the fact that both rhymes are not related to each other as far as flowing off of material used...

One last thing, PLEASE people, PLEASE, do not vote off of popularity and biases...I Have a slight feeling like that is what is happening unfortunately :smh:

This was a very good battle.


good points I initially thought3 but andey suggested 2 which was good we gotta keeps this moving.



:lol: @ this linguistics course. Ima start inserting foot notes and a bibliography after my rhyme. Ibid, bar 4, line 1. Can't take any chances ...

Mofo......you need your ass kicked, but yeah I see what you saying. Yall reading into the rhymes hard.
 
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The first round went to Mc but like most have said here the second kinda clinched it for Shane.


And I agree with Onslaught. No voting because of popularity. If they got skills then let that speak for itself.


Excellent round :yes:
 
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