About Love: Poems and Inspiration
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Damn!!!!!!!!You really let it flow at the end. Excellent creation, nice build up and climax. Props.
Thanks for the words Bushmon. I wish I could communicate in simpler terms, the way you do. I've always tried to eliminate the verbose in my writing but I can't seem to avoid the long winded. I love it when so much can be said with so very little. That is true mastery of language. I'm trying to get where you are.
(Into) The sun.
The taste of your intellect
heart pumping electric.
Didn't want to jump
and now you have thoughts of an eclectic, Heart Kleptic.
gets a little better.
Just a bit of focused fame.
sun shines, rains wine.
bright smile.
I told you I dream of your eyes
Competes with the sun.
High as heaven.
Heart beating electric...
Producing love in the sun.
Just trip for a few months.
I'll make you into love,
Just like the sun____
Some of my old ish....
Ummm Iz at least I'm posting...
no new stuff but you can't say I didn't participate...lol 
EMPTY
It was like morning dawning
A brand new day
A rebirth
Renewal...
All hoped for......realized
then.......
The walls came tumbling down
Sinking into depths unknown
Such sorrow.......Pain
Power of this knowledge
Strips my soul.....breaks my heart
Life over......barely begun
© MB
Ummm Iz at least I'm posting...
no new stuff but you can't say I didn't participate...lol EMPTY
It was like morning dawning
A brand new day
A rebirth
Renewal...
All hoped for......realized
then.......
The walls came tumbling down
Sinking into depths unknown
Such sorrow.......Pain
Power of this knowledge
Strips my soul.....breaks my heart
Life over......barely begun
© MB
My favorite verse.Powerful
Beautiful Iron- keep writing traveler.
Some of my old ish....
Ummm Iz at least I'm posting...
EMPTY
It was like morning dawning
A brand new day
A rebirth
Renewal...
All hoped for......realized
then.......
The walls came tumbling down
Sinking into depths unknown
Such sorrow.......Pain
Power of this knowledge
Strips my soul.....breaks my heart
Life over......barely begun
© MB
Awww yeah. Peer pressure prevails. This is some good stuff and its just the tip of the iceberg 
You would think a black man could not blush
Those lines sealed it. Nice!!!!!!
Some of my old ish....
Ummm Iz at least I'm posting...
EMPTY
Strips my soul.....breaks my heart
Life over......barely begun© MB
Baby I see that you are in a dark place and it takes courage to share from where you are at. Thank you for sharing this morsel of your soul, that we may partake. Keep writing; the pen shall be the key that opens the cell.
“Warrior’s Dream”
I surrendered imperiled deception,
Truce encompassed promised elevation,
Hate mirrored love evaded destruction.
Vengeance laid wasted trust,
Lingered pungent lust,
Aroma abandoned devotion thrust.
One man one woman social conformity,
Now allegiance exclusively,
Ascension...celestial serenity.
Awakened chaos storm,
Somber...illusive ally morn,
Bushmon
I got em contacting me to post they stuff anonymously! It's all good if I am chosen to be the ambassador of the anonymous female poets!
Envy
Mmmmmm she's lean, mean and green, with a poison unseen
she light and fluffy with a sweet taste and saged hue
fingering her with intensity is what i love to do
i please her, i tease her yeah i know she's the one
she takes me to levels that no one else has done
i am one with her and must spend time everyday
but she's a jealous bitch, no one gets in her way
not that white hoe, not lady heroine, nah not them
she a jealous one, a lioness protecting her den
she blesses this temple like only she knows
with every intake, the intensity grows
she dresses sexy for me to keep our love fresh
the leaves wrap her curves as its pulled and stretched
she is beautiful, sexy, strong, would never do me wrong
i cant believe this affair we have has gone on so long
That envious bitch grabs me and and damn she wont let go
addiction? infliction? hell no! this is my restitution!
my compensation for institution of my generation
for doing my life sentence that has been blessed upon me
So fuck what you say, imma smoke my shit and still be all i can be
cause in this life you do or die and aint shit free
so please believe with every day i wake and every breath i take
i will always insufflate and my weed i will continue to bake.
Envy
Mmmmmm she's lean, mean and green, with a poison unseen
she light and fluffy with a sweet taste and saged hue
fingering her with intensity is what i love to do
i please her, i tease her yeah i know she's the one
she takes me to levels that no one else has done
i am one with her and must spend time everyday
but she's a jealous bitch, no one gets in her way
not that white hoe, not lady heroine, nah not them
she a jealous one, a lioness protecting her den
she blesses this temple like only she knows
with every intake, the intensity grows
she dresses sexy for me to keep our love fresh
the leaves wrap her curves as its pulled and stretched
she is beautiful, sexy, strong, would never do me wrong
i cant believe this affair we have has gone on so long
That envious bitch grabs me and and damn she wont let go
addiction? infliction? hell no! this is my restitution!
my compensation for institution of my generation
for doing my life sentence that has been blessed upon me
So fuck what you say, imma smoke my shit and still be all i can be
cause in this life you do or die and aint shit free
so please believe with every day i wake and every breath i take
i will always insufflate and my weed i will continue to bake.
You would think a black man could not blushthank you for the kind words. I appreciate the love. Your style is fine, keep the flow pure from the heart.
Those lines sealed it. Nice!!!!!!
Baby I see that you are in a dark place and it takes courage to share from where you are at. Thank you for sharing this morsel of your soul, that we may partake. Keep writing; the pen shall be the key that opens the cell.
Bush I wrote that a while forward. It was a dark place to be in. I figure its a lot to do with my mental blockage.
I used to write a lot, I got a folder with all my ish lying around somewhere. LOL maybe I'll use you as my inspiration cuz when I read stuff like the one below
Damn....
“Warrior’s Dream”
I surrendered imperiled deception,
Truce encompassed promised elevation,
Hate mirrored love evaded destruction.
Vengeance laid wasted trust,
Lingered pungent lust,
Aroma abandoned devotion thrust.
One man one woman social conformity,
Now allegiance exclusively,
Ascension...celestial serenity.
Awakened chaos storm,
Somber...illusive ally morn,
Bushmon
You are such a soulful man.
Whoever these ladies are please come out. Get your dues sistas. Niceness
Cyba the ladies have love for you bredren
peace
Where is Sexxy BB- she would be in love with this!
This is really good stuff (excellent metaphor) and Cyba you are apparently the poet by proxy.
“Warrior’s Dream”
I surrendered imperiled deception,
Truce encompassed promised elevation,
Hate mirrored love evaded destruction.
Vengeance laid wasted trust,
Lingered pungent lust,
Aroma abandoned devotion thrust.
One man one woman social conformity,
Now allegiance exclusively,
Ascension...celestial serenity.
Awakened chaos storm,
Somber...illusive ally morn,
Bushmon
This is just so richly textured, Bush.
Lady S -smile!
You know we had to get it out of you sometime........
Now I'm honored to present a first for this thread. A lovely poetess- her own words and own voice!!! Her voice every bit as lyrical as the words. I'm not sure if she wants to go anon or not so for now just enjoy the mystery
Do You Remember
http://www.sendspace.com/file/rnr90x
Hidden Memories
http://www.sendspace.com/file/20q540
This is about a friend I've known for years after a while my feelings began to change towards her. I had to decide to either tell her and risk a beautiful friendship or say nothing and watched what coud have been from the side lines. I hope enjoy
© Nob1e
I Could Imagine You…
I could imagine your eyes, bright and lively
Excitement coursing through the pools of blue sea
Your hands moving animatedly
Gesturing and talking in ways your mere words could not extend
I listened patiently
Fascinated
Not with what you had to say, but in the resonant
Sound in which you said it
Inside I secretly ached because I wanted to have been
The one to bring such life into you
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the strength to
I could imagine your eyes, hooded and downcast
Anger fusing to cause electricity in your stormy skies
Your hands clenched in fists of rage
Tight and rigid on your lap
I listened cautiously
Furious
Not at you and the way you reacted, but with the way he made your voice
Tremble
Inside my fury burned because I wanted to have been
The one to make you feel such intensity
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the will to
I could imagine your eyes, coy and sly
Passion dilating your pupils
Your hands open and slick with sweat
Rubbing over your jeans to dry them
I listened painfully
Jealous
Not because you felt bliss and joy, but because you felt it with him
Inside my heart broke because I wanted to have been
The one to bring you to such a fervent pitch of desire
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the courage to
I could imagine your eyes, sad and pained
Unshed tears creating a wall of anguish
Your hands trembling like a child’s
Shaking as they cradled your head
I listened silently
Miserable
Not because of you but because he had caused you to feel such
Hurt.
Inside my heart was torn because I felt sorry for you
And him even though
I secretly wanted to have been the one whose name
You sobbed
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the heart to
I could imagine your eyes, distant and weary
Your eyelids shutting out the world
Your hands, limp like rags
Hanging lifelessly on each side of your body
I listened intently
Desperate
Not because I was drinking in your every word
But because I was straining to hear you speak a word at all
Inside my heart was cold because I could not comfort you
When you needed me most
I told you then, but only because I couldn’t find and more
Reasons not to
I could imagine your eye’s wide and startled
Your eye’s looking away
Your hands fidgeting restlessly
Nervously running through your hair
I listened abjectly
Depressed
Not because you didn’t care, but because you cared
Too much to let me dream
Inside my heart shattered because I thought my world
Had ended
I thought of dying then, but I couldn’t find the words to tell you
I could imagine your eyes, sympathetic and pleading
Your brows shuttered out of concern
Your hands stretched out in front of your body
Reaching out to me
I didn’t listen then
Hollow
I walked away, not because you hurt me, but because
I was hurting myself by looking at you
Inside my heart cried because all these months
I spent my life imagining you-
And all I ever wanted was for you to imagine me too.
I could imagine your eyes, bright and lively
Excitement coursing through the pools of blue sea
Your hands moving animatedly
Gesturing and talking in ways your mere words could not extend
I listened patiently
Fascinated
Not with what you had to say, but in the resonant
Sound in which you said it
Inside I secretly ached because I wanted to have been
The one to bring such life into you
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the strength to
I could imagine your eyes, hooded and downcast
Anger fusing to cause electricity in your stormy skies
Your hands clenched in fists of rage
Tight and rigid on your lap
I listened cautiously
Furious
Not at you and the way you reacted, but with the way he made your voice
Tremble
Inside my fury burned because I wanted to have been
The one to make you feel such intensity
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the will to
I could imagine your eyes, coy and sly
Passion dilating your pupils
Your hands open and slick with sweat
Rubbing over your jeans to dry them
I listened painfully
Jealous
Not because you felt bliss and joy, but because you felt it with him
Inside my heart broke because I wanted to have been
The one to bring you to such a fervent pitch of desire
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the courage to
I could imagine your eyes, sad and pained
Unshed tears creating a wall of anguish
Your hands trembling like a child’s
Shaking as they cradled your head
I listened silently
Miserable
Not because of you but because he had caused you to feel such
Hurt.
Inside my heart was torn because I felt sorry for you
And him even though
I secretly wanted to have been the one whose name
You sobbed
I thought of telling you then, but I didn’t have the heart to
I could imagine your eyes, distant and weary
Your eyelids shutting out the world
Your hands, limp like rags
Hanging lifelessly on each side of your body
I listened intently
Desperate
Not because I was drinking in your every word
But because I was straining to hear you speak a word at all
Inside my heart was cold because I could not comfort you
When you needed me most
I told you then, but only because I couldn’t find and more
Reasons not to
I could imagine your eye’s wide and startled
Your eye’s looking away
Your hands fidgeting restlessly
Nervously running through your hair
I listened abjectly
Depressed
Not because you didn’t care, but because you cared
Too much to let me dream
Inside my heart shattered because I thought my world
Had ended
I thought of dying then, but I couldn’t find the words to tell you
I could imagine your eyes, sympathetic and pleading
Your brows shuttered out of concern
Your hands stretched out in front of your body
Reaching out to me
I didn’t listen then
Hollow
I walked away, not because you hurt me, but because
I was hurting myself by looking at you
Inside my heart cried because all these months
I spent my life imagining you-
And all I ever wanted was for you to imagine me too.
© Nob1e
Yanno i peeped it.. smokin a dedication blunt right now... gotta love havin a hour lunch break! HOLLA!Where is Sexxy BB- she would be in love with this!
This is really good stuff (excellent metaphor) and Cyba you are apparently the poet by proxy.
This is just so richly textured, Bush.
Lady S -smile!
.......
Now I'm honored to present a first for this thread. A lovely poetess- her own words and own voice!!! Her voice every bit as lyrical as the words. I'm not sure if she wants to go anon or not so for now just enjoy the mystery
Do You Remember
http://www.sendspace.com/file/rnr90x
Hidden Memories
http://www.sendspace.com/file/20q540
WOW this was a beautifully written piece. Thanks for sharing please write some more.Where is Sexxy BB- she would be in love with this!
This is really good stuff (excellent metaphor) and Cyba you are apparently the poet by proxy.
This is just so richly textured, Bush.
Lady S -smile!
.......
Now I'm honored to present a first for this thread. A lovely poetess- her own words and own voice!!! Her voice every bit as lyrical as the words. I'm not sure if she wants to go anon or not so for now just enjoy the mystery
Do You Remember
http://www.sendspace.com/file/rnr90x
Hidden Memories
http://www.sendspace.com/file/20q540
Its funny you mentioned Sxxy I thought of her when I read that piece as well. I knew it couldn't be her she's not afraid to post
Sxxy you are something else girl.
AlexandMorgan
Banned
Not supposed to be serious. Just trying something here.
I once had this beautiful lady
Who loved to fight
But i loved to fuck
You would think the two
Go hand in hand
Not with this chick
Cause Palmela was always in demand
She was always fucking fighting
And i was fighting to fuck
Finally just said fuck it
Cause i am a horny dude
Bitch would always start fights
While she walking around nude
And if i ever touched her she would scream
I was obviously dealing with a prude
Now usually i do not hit women
But one time she was being really rude
Said something nasty bout my moms
So i grabbed her ass
Of course once again she was nude
Beat her ass like mad with my hand
My hand started to get really wet
I thought she had pissed herself
And i was getting really upset
So i looked to see what my hand had touched
Never knew a pussy could juice that damned much
Now i knew her dark secret
She was never horny till she got beat
Often on a night i had to get up
More than once to change the sheet
Now i know what some of u all thinking
His stupid ass can go to jail
Should she ever get mad
Change her version of the tale
And inform on this stupid male
But she knows if she does that
That she will be starring
In a whole lot of DVDs
That will be going on a dollar sale
I once had this beautiful lady
Who loved to fight
But i loved to fuck
You would think the two
Go hand in hand
Not with this chick
Cause Palmela was always in demand
She was always fucking fighting
And i was fighting to fuck
Finally just said fuck it
Cause i am a horny dude
Bitch would always start fights
While she walking around nude
And if i ever touched her she would scream
I was obviously dealing with a prude
Now usually i do not hit women
But one time she was being really rude
Said something nasty bout my moms
So i grabbed her ass
Of course once again she was nude
Beat her ass like mad with my hand
My hand started to get really wet
I thought she had pissed herself
And i was getting really upset
So i looked to see what my hand had touched
Never knew a pussy could juice that damned much
Now i knew her dark secret
She was never horny till she got beat
Often on a night i had to get up
More than once to change the sheet
Now i know what some of u all thinking
His stupid ass can go to jail
Should she ever get mad
Change her version of the tale
And inform on this stupid male
But she knows if she does that
That she will be starring
In a whole lot of DVDs
That will be going on a dollar sale
I definitely enjoyed that! I invite you to post more if you like
AlexandM you are full of surprises ! That was quite a departure for you or was it? I'm curious now!
Thank You both for the kind words. I would be more than happy to share more of my work
AlexandMorgan
Banned
I have never been in a situation like that actually. That is poetic fiction LOL. I was just trying something different and that is what emerged.
I know this thread is for inspirational & love poems, but to be honest most of my work is of a dark nature and would not be appropriate here. On another note this next piece was my attempt erotica, enjoy
Untitled
I see myself holding you close to me.
Squeezing your body tight
But for all I see as I day dream
I know I’ll get ten fold tonight
Running my palms across your
Lip
Feeling your hands upon my
chest
The softness of each fingertip
Tasting your neck so sweet, so
Soft
And slowly lowering my kiss
Over pert nipples, across your
Navel
And finally into pure bliss
Looking upon your face from
Blow
As you tilt back your head
Feeling your fountains begin to
Flow
As you ease back on the bed
Your Innocent little devil look
Crying insatiably with the
Sensation
Lip to lip lapping up every drip
From the well of your creation
The way you pull me up by the
Hair
To the heat of your mouth, on
Fire
No other thoughts, no other
Cares
Just the quenching of mad
Desire
Riding the tide of passion
Pushing my love into you
On the waves of emotion
In slow motion so sweet and
True
Pulse pounding in resounding
Rapture
Taken to the hilt, then just past
Rhythm growing, faces glowing
The climax coming fast.
That heated illicit look
Of ecstasy across your eyes
The culmination nearing
Within your undulating thighs
Echoing throughout the heavens
On overindulgent cries
The sultry look upon your face
In reaching that gyrating gush
The way you bite my fingers
When I try to make you hush
Your arching back, your
Fingernails
Your perfume mixed with sweat
The way you keep rubbing
Against me
With your insides already so
Wet
The way when I’m beat dead
And ready
To fall face first to the floor
You put your sweet lips to my
Ear
And whisper I want more
© Nob1e
I see myself holding you close to me.
Squeezing your body tight
But for all I see as I day dream
I know I’ll get ten fold tonight
Running my palms across your
Lip
Feeling your hands upon my
chest
The softness of each fingertip
Tasting your neck so sweet, so
Soft
And slowly lowering my kiss
Over pert nipples, across your
Navel
And finally into pure bliss
Looking upon your face from
Blow
As you tilt back your head
Feeling your fountains begin to
Flow
As you ease back on the bed
Your Innocent little devil look
Crying insatiably with the
Sensation
Lip to lip lapping up every drip
From the well of your creation
The way you pull me up by the
Hair
To the heat of your mouth, on
Fire
No other thoughts, no other
Cares
Just the quenching of mad
Desire
Riding the tide of passion
Pushing my love into you
On the waves of emotion
In slow motion so sweet and
True
Pulse pounding in resounding
Rapture
Taken to the hilt, then just past
Rhythm growing, faces glowing
The climax coming fast.
That heated illicit look
Of ecstasy across your eyes
The culmination nearing
Within your undulating thighs
Echoing throughout the heavens
On overindulgent cries
The sultry look upon your face
In reaching that gyrating gush
The way you bite my fingers
When I try to make you hush
Your arching back, your
Fingernails
Your perfume mixed with sweat
The way you keep rubbing
Against me
With your insides already so
Wet
The way when I’m beat dead
And ready
To fall face first to the floor
You put your sweet lips to my
Ear
And whisper I want more
© Nob1e
Bredren you are welcome to post any type of poetry in this joint, now if you want to fight out a demon or two there IS a thread for that I mean if you've got what it takes that is
Share you words, something inspired you to write them please feel free to share.
Thats a nice piece of erotic vibes you got going on there bredren....keep them coming
I mean if you've got what it takes that is Share you words, something inspired you to write them please feel free to share.
Thats a nice piece of erotic vibes you got going on there bredren....keep them coming
I know this thread is for inspirational & love poems, but to be honest most of my work is of a dark nature and would not be appropriate here. On another note this next piece was my attempt erotica, enjoy
Untitled
I see myself holding you close to me.
Squeezing your body tight
But for all I see as I day dream
I know I’ll get ten fold tonight
Running my palms across your
Lip
Feeling your hands upon my
chest
The softness of each fingertip
Tasting your neck so sweet, so
Soft
And slowly lowering my kiss
Over pert nipples, across your
Navel
And finally into pure bliss
Looking upon your face from
Blow
As you tilt back your head
Feeling your fountains begin to
Flow
As you ease back on the bed
Your Innocent little devil look
Crying insatiably with the
Sensation
Lip to lip lapping up every drip
From the well of your creation
The way you pull me up by the
Hair
To the heat of your mouth, on
Fire
No other thoughts, no other
Cares
Just the quenching of mad
Desire
Riding the tide of passion
Pushing my love into you
On the waves of emotion
In slow motion so sweet and
True
Pulse pounding in resounding
Rapture
Taken to the hilt, then just past
Rhythm growing, faces glowing
The climax coming fast.
That heated illicit look
Of ecstasy across your eyes
The culmination nearing
Within your undulating thighs
Echoing throughout the heavens
On overindulgent cries
The sultry look upon your face
In reaching that gyrating gush
The way you bite my fingers
When I try to make you hush
Your arching back, your
Fingernails
Your perfume mixed with sweat
The way you keep rubbing
Against me
With your insides already so
Wet
The way when I’m beat dead
And ready
To fall face first to the floor
You put your sweet lips to my
Ear
And whisper I want more
© Nob1e
Bredren you are welcome to post any type of poetry in this joint, now if you want to fight out a demon or two there IS a thread for that
Share you words, something inspired you to write them please feel free to share.
Thats a nice piece of erotic vibes you got going on there bredren....keep them coming
Hellfish let me second what Lady Scorpio has said. You are always welcome to post here. If you want a blood shed style hip hop thread there's a seperate one for that
That piece...*Swoon*
Very sensual!
Once again lady's I thank you for the kind words. I have passed through the other thread and found it both funny and creative, but I don't think I'm up to that challenge yet, but who knows!
Now for more
It All Means Something
Sketchy details
Telling a story
Incomplete
Yet understood
Stolen moments
Days long forgotten
A word
Odd in its appearance
Drunk with meaning
Mysteries unfolded
Secrets betrayed
Hurts acknowledged
Recognized for the worth of their lessons
Anger-redemption-forgiveness
A phrase
Of something greater than itself
A part of nothing
Complete in all it conveys
Rambling thoughts expunged
Seedy desires
Devious machinations
True-pure-unprotected
A sentence, a paragraph
A page
Lost in their language
Found in their feeling
© Nob1e
Sketchy details
Telling a story
Incomplete
Yet understood
Stolen moments
Days long forgotten
A word
Odd in its appearance
Drunk with meaning
Mysteries unfolded
Secrets betrayed
Hurts acknowledged
Recognized for the worth of their lessons
Anger-redemption-forgiveness
A phrase
Of something greater than itself
A part of nothing
Complete in all it conveys
Rambling thoughts expunged
Seedy desires
Devious machinations
True-pure-unprotected
A sentence, a paragraph
A page
Lost in their language
Found in their feeling
© Nob1e
Izzy..... you know what you need to do Miss Izzy cuz you know in here is where I can't be as "encouraging" but I know you know what I really wanna say about this.
I like dis one
you know what you need to do Miss Izzy cuz you know in here is where I can't be as "encouraging" but I know you know what I really wanna say about this. I like dis one
AlexandMorgan
Banned
Questions????
Do u like people?
Sort of i guess
I care too much sometimes
And i usually end up in a mess.
Do u love sex?
Yes. Why should u have to even ask
But i guess i am afraid of the rejection and the pain
My heart can not stand up to that task.
Why do you act so cold?
I gave my heart one to many times
So now i just smile
And hide behind my rhymes.
Do u believe in love?
I have to say yes
If u are willing to risk
An escape from loneliness
Do you like children?
Sometimes no and sometimes yes
Yes to the chance to mold a life
An hell no to the diaper mess
Do u like recognition?
Sometimes i even dream of fame
But i have seen what too much can do
And it is a crying shame.
What makes you go on?
Life is short but that short moves real slow
And if i open myself enough
My heart will eventually regrow.
Do u like people?
Sort of i guess
I care too much sometimes
And i usually end up in a mess.
Do u love sex?
Yes. Why should u have to even ask
But i guess i am afraid of the rejection and the pain
My heart can not stand up to that task.
Why do you act so cold?
I gave my heart one to many times
So now i just smile
And hide behind my rhymes.
Do u believe in love?
I have to say yes
If u are willing to risk
An escape from loneliness
Do you like children?
Sometimes no and sometimes yes
Yes to the chance to mold a life
An hell no to the diaper mess
Do u like recognition?
Sometimes i even dream of fame
But i have seen what too much can do
And it is a crying shame.
What makes you go on?
Life is short but that short moves real slow
And if i open myself enough
My heart will eventually regrow.
Fantastic! A literature lovers litany.
Izzy.....
I like dis one
Uh Hellfish you done started something, but you are right there's blood in the water in that thread. If you feel the least bit uncertain 
Alex I love this. It has the style of Gibran's prophet where he starts each passage with a question posed.
AlexandMorgan
Banned
Thanks i had some sweet potato and cassava on the stove and it came to me so i went and wrote while it was still in my head.
Lost many a potential poem, story and even song because i did not write them down the same time lol
Thanks to everyone that read and commented on my work. I'am trying to get better. So I've written a new one.
Bitter Sweet
Your love is bittersweet.
Your cold but you warm me.
You lift my feet then drop me to the ground.
"cause your love is bittersweet.
You save me then sacrafice me.
I want to leave, but you keep calling me.
My heart vibrates then aches
and you keep trying me.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
Your love, is warmth in a summer breeze.
It's trap in between like midnight dog days.
We kiss and you taste like ice cream.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
You love, to talk, but wont speak for a week.
Your words, makes me weak,
but I can't stop thinking about
what your thoughts feed me.
You feel like home.
But I can't find the key.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
Your touch is like a charming fire
it sooths then burns me.
Why do i feel so big,
then small when your around me?
You make time for me.
Then leave me lonely.
'cause your love is bitterseet.
Your right at my finger tips.
But stay far enough so i can't reach.
'cause your love is BitterSweet?
Bitter Sweet
Your love is bittersweet.
Your cold but you warm me.
You lift my feet then drop me to the ground.
"cause your love is bittersweet.
You save me then sacrafice me.
I want to leave, but you keep calling me.
My heart vibrates then aches
and you keep trying me.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
Your love, is warmth in a summer breeze.
It's trap in between like midnight dog days.
We kiss and you taste like ice cream.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
You love, to talk, but wont speak for a week.
Your words, makes me weak,
but I can't stop thinking about
what your thoughts feed me.
You feel like home.
But I can't find the key.
'cause your love is bittersweet.
Your touch is like a charming fire
it sooths then burns me.
Why do i feel so big,
then small when your around me?
You make time for me.
Then leave me lonely.
'cause your love is bitterseet.
Your right at my finger tips.
But stay far enough so i can't reach.
'cause your love is BitterSweet?
love ain’t shit
you want a love poem
well this ain’t it
a poem about something that doesn’t exist
imagine that
wouldn’t that be cool
a poem about some bullshit
you just don’t do
or can’t
won’t
will not
can
not
love ain’t shit
just ask the tricks and ho’s
it’s just another four letter vulgarity
an emotional absurdity
how do i fuck thee
how some count the ways
lack of display
what is this sick thing
love is a burden
why else would you permit so much
pain
suffering
cheating
beating
lying
stealing
jealousy
anger
that is love
is that what all call
some try not to fall
others trip and lose their sense
most would agree it is intense
a sickness
the loss of which
has brought some death
others have claimed
it equates life’s breath
neither word
nor concept
reality cannot detail
fantasy serves only to fail
is its own benefactor
derived in life
what other satisfaction
could equate
its nemesis hate
this is not a game to play
it does not wane
in night or day
its honesty can smother some
its absence desired
in truth by none
without definition
in truth existing
if blessed with
can be uplifting
abused
mislabeled
confused
distorted
denied
lied
cried
only to have had
this known unknown
without shape
without form
universal
no translation needed
even if no one shows they feel it
there is no negating its existence
figure it out…
do it…
must
you
i
me
we
all
love
well this ain’t it
a poem about something that doesn’t exist
imagine that
wouldn’t that be cool
a poem about some bullshit
you just don’t do
or can’t
won’t
will not
can
not
love ain’t shit
just ask the tricks and ho’s
it’s just another four letter vulgarity
an emotional absurdity
how do i fuck thee
how some count the ways
lack of display
what is this sick thing
love is a burden
why else would you permit so much
pain
suffering
cheating
beating
lying
stealing
jealousy
anger
that is love
is that what all call
some try not to fall
others trip and lose their sense
most would agree it is intense
a sickness
the loss of which
has brought some death
others have claimed
it equates life’s breath
neither word
nor concept
reality cannot detail
fantasy serves only to fail
is its own benefactor
derived in life
what other satisfaction
could equate
its nemesis hate
this is not a game to play
it does not wane
in night or day
its honesty can smother some
its absence desired
in truth by none
without definition
in truth existing
if blessed with
can be uplifting
abused
mislabeled
confused
distorted
denied
lied
cried
only to have had
this known unknown
without shape
without form
universal
no translation needed
even if no one shows they feel it
there is no negating its existence
figure it out…
do it…
must
you
i
me
we
all
love
this poem is dedicated to the BGOL masses...
Alexand this is pure poetry in motion. I love it.
I am extremely happy that you have chosen to pick up your pen and write. Bless
Alex I love this. It has the style of Gibran's prophet where he starts each passage with a question posed.
Thanks sis you know I wouldn't have been so ummm diplomatic
Izzy girl Alexand is inspired. I love it.
Lawd ground provisions.
I could do with dem right bout now freshly dug from de ground. Alexand you better cook more often if this is what happens yuh hear
Iron you are doing good things bredren. Keep that vibe going. I am loving this.
Keep going Iron!
BNKD- that's some of the realest shit ever posted in this thread. Thanks you sir.
appreciated.
that poem really is dedicated to this board, 'cause there seems to be a gang of socio-emotionally dysfunctional peeps who frequent this space. i've got my own damn issues, but goddamn...
anyways, i was inspired on various levels to bus' that shit out when i crept up on this particular thread...
call me a renaissance man: i dig the shit out of porn/sex, but i'm cultured as well...go figure...
that poem really is dedicated to this board, 'cause there seems to be a gang of socio-emotionally dysfunctional peeps who frequent this space. i've got my own damn issues, but goddamn...
anyways, i was inspired on various levels to bus' that shit out when i crept up on this particular thread...
call me a renaissance man: i dig the shit out of porn/sex, but i'm cultured as well...go figure...
I hope you continue to be inspired no doubt.
no doubt. appreciated.
that poem really is dedicated to this board, 'cause there seems to be a gang of socio-emotionally dysfunctional peeps who frequent this space. i've got my own damn issues, but goddamn...
anyways, i was inspired on various levels to bus' that shit out when i crept up on this particular thread...
call me a renaissance man: i dig the shit out of porn/sex, but i'm cultured as well...go figure...
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