Poetry battles....if you got what it takes then come forward.

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Aight shane you have been a worthy opponent. This can drag on for ever so I'm gonna end it here.

:smh: Who told you this ends.....man you read the name on this board....SOL...when the ladies say it dun it dun....:smh: What de rass I does see attall....


Starting shit just like you Ms Scorpio. :lol:

Man these cats don't want it. :lol:

But looks like the battle is over. Guyver didn't know you had it in you bruh. I gotta give you props on them last verses you went hard. :lol:


eh hem....I pretty sure I asked you Mr. Krook not to return unless you plan to drop a verse in here. i realise that Dexter and Guyver and MSC have you running but :smh: thought you had it in you...:smh:




Anyways I will continue my commentary regarding the last few verses after these messages from our sponsors :D in other words I just got home and I need a shower.


Peace
 
eh hem....I pretty sure I asked you Mr. Krook not to return unless you plan to drop a verse in here. i realise that Dexter and Guyver and MSC have you running but :smh: thought you had it in you...:smh:

Lol! You gonna ban me? :lol:

No fear runs through these veins baby girl but the only one talking shit to me in this thread is you.:lol:


Yea you out of pocket.:hmm:
 
Starting shit just like you Ms Scorpio. :lol:

Man these cats don't want it. :lol:

But looks like the battle is over. Guyver didn't know you had it in you bruh. I gotta give you props on them last verses you went hard. :lol:


It was the darkness in me.:lol:

Thanks my fellow dark brother.
 
He said fellow dark brother. :lol:

I see Shane said he was light skin too. Maybe if Ari comes out of hiding we can have a battle royal in this mutha fucka. The Zulus against the Pretty Boys. :lol:
 
He said fellow dark brother. :lol:

I see Shane said he was light skin too. Maybe if Ari comes out of hiding we can have a battle royal in this mutha fucka. The Zulus against the Pretty Boys. :lol:


I'm exhausted, that shane aint no joke. He kept me on my toes. That shit was like a matrix fight scene. I need a couple of days to recover. :lol:
 
Lol! You gonna ban me? :lol:

No fear runs through these veins baby girl but the only one talking shit to me in this thread is you.:lol:


Yea you out of pocket.:hmm:

:hmm::hmm:

It was the darkness in me.:lol:

Thanks my fellow dark brother.
:hmm:

He said fellow dark brother. :lol:

I see Shane said he was light skin too. Maybe if Ari comes out of hiding we can have a battle royal in this mutha fucka. The Zulus against the Pretty Boys. :lol:
:hmm::hmm:

I'm exhausted, that shane aint no joke. He kept me on my toes. That shit was like a matrix fight scene. I need a couple of days to recover. :lol:
Hmmmm ohh rly....interesting

Well you know how the poe poe is. Look like they are trying to keep shit stirred up...
:hmm::hmm::hmm:

:smh: And she leans toward the light (I'm just waiting). Just watch how she do.

:hmm::hmm:



Well I'm back ladies and gents, Mcguyver you were supposed to come dry me off. :smh: hmm guess you didnt want those extra points huh. :lol: j/k


Well it seems that Dexter aka American Psycho aka Shane has after Mr Guyver giving up :hmm: won by default. Sowwry did i give it to the light skinned brotha....:hmm: call me po po....


I would like to challenge any one of the other brothers who arent afraid of Shane to come forward .Perhaps teach Mr 1978 a lil lesson if you can that is :yes:
 
:smh: You just proved every thing i sad about you right. He never answered but whatever, happened just like i predicted. :smh:

Ignorance is blitz.
 
:smh: You just proved every thing i sad about you right. He never answered but whatever, happened just like i predicted. :smh:

Ignorance is blitz.

You think that its becuz Shane's a lightskinned brother that I said he got the props? :smh: man guyver you know ah gots love for you but c'mon man
Look anyone can tell that Shane had been doing this for more than a minute he came at all yall off the top. Whereas you had to think on it first.

And really babes this was all in fun. The ladies loved it and well at some point somebody is gonna have to take Shane on. :lol:
I'd do it but he'd kick my bajan ass thats for sure. :yes:


peace n love
 
Sorry for the delay,
make no mistake, Im here to stay.

In Iraq where things are wack,
Im just making my stack.

Shane calls me a sucker I see
guess he thought that would make me flee.

Hes got a little rhyme thats cool,
I had his girl, now he's the fool.

Yes its true, props to shane are due,
but beware, I can pull his sister too.
 
Hold on.

Hold THE FUCK ON.

This is just word battle.

No one needs to take this as a light skinned/Dark skinned war.

I personally had no issue with shit said.

I went hard like everyone else. I expected and got back the same.

We are all just showing out with words ya'll.


That's all.



I'm your huckleberry if you wanna make it light VS black. Or fuck Shane this and that. Say when.

But personally, I ain't got nothing against any BLACK MAN. Light, Dark, P Rock or Haitian.

Let's take it easy, and act like Men while we play gladiator on the female's field.

Peace to all.




P. fucking S.

Raptor ES
Pray for the bless, because tomorrow, it's sorrow
I'm going to lay you to rest
 
He said fellow dark brother. :lol:

I see Shane said he was light skin too. Maybe if Ari comes out of hiding we can have a battle royal in this mutha fucka. The Zulus against the Pretty Boys. :lol:


C'mon, this thread only, you fake ass Hambuglar -

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Well it seems we underestimated Raptor ES it seems that he has no fear of the SOL wordsound killa:lol:...Could he be the one? Shane came back and laid it all out man he even called Pussy Krook out :lol: will he step up to the challenge. Remains to be seen yall, Stay tuned.
 
You think that its becuz Shane's a lightskinned brother that I said he got the props? :smh: man guyver you know ah gots love for you but c'mon man
Look anyone can tell that Shane had been doing this for more than a minute he came at all yall off the top. Whereas you had to think on it first.

And really babes this was all in fun. The ladies loved it and well at some point somebody is gonna have to take Shane on. :lol:
I'd do it but he'd kick my bajan ass thats for sure. :yes:


peace n love



AWWW! sit the fuck down and shut the fuck up.

Anybody could see how your one sided commentary sucked.

How did you take over the thread anyway?

This thread wasn't even your idea.

I say sit down shut up let people vote.

cause everyone can see on shanes dick you are stuck.




@SHANE
Aint about light and dark shane its about fun we Joking kid. But that was the main reason I left cause i was getting tired of her comments and this shit wasn't ending. It was clearly me and you in the end.


Peace homie.
 
AWWW! sit the fuck down and shut the fuck up.

Anybody could see how your one sided commentary sucked.

How did you take over the thread anyway?

This thread wasn't even your idea.

I say sit down shut up let people vote.

cause everyone can see on shanes dick you are stuck.




@SHANE
Aint about light and dark shane its about fun we Joking kid. But that was the main reason I left cause i was getting tired of her comments and this shit wasn't ending. It was clearly me and you in the end.


Peace homie.


Awww did you need a hug....look at lil mcguyver being the e-thug is that really the best that you've got, made you feel better huh?
Man you need to relax and chill the hell out. It aint that serious. If you are that ignorant that you can't even see that then it is probably best that you leave the "POETRY" for those who can take it for what it is. You wont always get yeses in your life. There is always someone who can do something better than you can Mcguyver. Taking this stuff personal is a tad on the childish side and really words don't hurt me. Cuss me all you want. Really it makes me look bad. :hmm:



Peace
 
WTF :confused: What's going on in here? Yall need a time-out!

LOVE BREAK FOR ALL HUES OF BLACK PEOPLE MOMENT

A Poem Of Friendship by Nikki Giovanni


We are not lovers
because of the love
we make
but the love
we have


We are not friends
because of the laughs
we spend
but the tears
we save


I don't want to be near you
for the thoughts we share
but the words we never have
to speak


I will never miss you
because of what we do
but what we are
together



Smile yall- now everybody stop crying and get back to rhymin :angry::)
 
WTF :confused: What's going on in here? Yall need a time-out!

LOVE BREAK FOR ALL HUES OF BLACK PEOPLE MOMENT

A Poem Of Friendship by Nikki Giovanni


We are not lovers
because of the love
we make
but the love
we have


We are not friends
because of the laughs
we spend
but the tears
we save


I don't want to be near you
for the thoughts we share
but the words we never have
to speak


I will never miss you
because of what we do
but what we are
together



Smile yall- now everybody stop crying and get back to rhymin :angry::)

:lol::lol::lol:
 
OH SHIT! My bad PO PO I forgot to turn the monster off. I thought you would have came back with a rhyme. I aint taking nothin serious. Look at the thread I'm the only one battling that gave props. But it is what it is. I know you and you know me. You gonna do what you want regardless and I don't like to spin my wheels. So on that note I apologise if you took it wrong.

And the light you was leaning on was Shane not because he was light. That conversation was between me and PK. He said shane is light skinned and I said you were gonna lean against the light.
Do you Queen obviously this is your thread. :rolleyes:

And i never hesitated for the record. I said he was tough but i never hesitated.

and I'm out.
 
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Hold up hold up hold up...

The whole light skin dark skin thing for me was just a little shit talking in the spirit of BGOL. I forgot this was SOL so I might have been a little out of bounds but don't get it twisted. A brother is a brother to me I got love for all ya'll. Good poem Izayoi. And as you command back to the rhyming...

Yo Shane! You a black cowboy now? :lol:

Fake ass hamburglar? Naw partner lyrical murderer
Want to know why they call me Pussy Krook? Ask your girl cause I serve her
I talk shit to make cats jump but ya'll too shook to act up
Fool my raps rough You'll get smacked up and ya'll boo will get snatched up
All these clowns and I got you cats trained its like I'm in the circus
But ain't putting my head in your mouth no matter how much ya'll ask fer it
I RSVP your girls jaws for that
Shane I'm guessing 'mod' stand for moderate after peepin all your raps

And if Raptor ES or MSC want it I got that ether
I rap to the death and leave so much devastation they'll have to call FEMA
 
Mercy


When I get you in my bed, the only thing that you won’t get is sleep. I will adorn your splendid body with an artful tongue, which which makes Shakespeare’s seem trivial, useless and tied.

I will bang your drums slowly and diligently, like at a funeral for a serviceman, while at the same time stroking your ego like long nimble fingers poised at a harp—reflecting every note as my want encompassed you.

I will devour you with the savagery of a salt-water crocodile, whose bone crushing efforts to satisfy his lust will fail in comparison to mine.

To want for so long for me has become a sickness that rivals a ripper’s, stalker’s or strangler’s, and one day I can’t be accountable for my actions.


To slay you with little or mercy, if any, is my goal. To die inside of you numerous times—to push you aside forsaking you, after all this was the plan. Then to turn you into the hunter--the wolf from sheep. To make you learn to stalk and to corner your quarry, then to kill with innate viciousness.

I will be your prey, find me in the tall grass, and I swear that I will pull my shirt away—offering my throat to you.

There. Sink your teeth into me. Pleasure me with powerful jaws that kill with no mercy.
 
ONE MORE--Yall mothefuckers are my heroes. Thats for real and as a matter of fact BGOL is a major part in my latest Script titled Real Bitch--when it sells we go world wide.














King Kong



I hate his momma for having him, and for not swallowing him when she had a chance.

Would kill his children if I could get away with it—‘cause scumbag seems to be hereditary.

Thought he could get away with it 'cause he signed my checks, thought he was impervious ‘cause boss was plastered across his door.

Thought that he could say or do whatever he chose
Didn’t know that the hood still flowed through me.

Let him rant and rave—everything short of calling me a nigga.
He spit screamed and beat his chest and hurl obscenities that were designed to bruise like stones.

Got fed up at this fool and I had to place a call to my mans across town. Tol' 'em that I had some work that needed to be put in.

Square oak table legs—all four leg bones broken.

They caught him at his expensive car and pushed his face into the tinted glass. Didn’t take his money or jewelry. They pushed him to the cold pavement and stepped into his face like wine makers.

He screamed like a bitch, like bitch I swear, when just a few short hours ago, he screamed like King Kong. I watched from across the street, from a dark vantage point.

Then came the table legs from out of nowhere—drilled with rawhide rope though the handle.

They beat his legs ‘til the thuds became nil—his bones were like powder I was sure—his leg, hip and knees. King Kong screamed like a bitch.

My people are my people, but they attack like Hyenas, kill and in and instant are gone, and all that was left was a bloody carcass.


I watched him seep into the sewer, then in and out of consciousness.

King Kong came back to work about six months later. He never again screamed or spat of beat his chest; he instead hummed all of the time, and I became quite fond of the sound that the electric wheel chair made.


ANY WRITERS WANNA NETWORK GET AT ME AT blackink_66@yahoo.com
 
S ilently slippin, my murda spits itchin in sadistic tension
H eated vision rippin & searin a love sick greek, I murked burnt benson
A ri's da bitch guyver used RX on, stamina spinnin, a butt fuck mission
N asty ninjaz nitpickin naturally like loose lip BGOL blunt bitchez
E asily I make both scorpio drip love venom, I long dicked um

I mma bend ova lady, face down ass up, slow lick her center
S lide n lick n flick n blow n pull, scorpio, slow beat or hard hitter?

D eep in her, I look up, damn those legs?.. :yes: its the twin sister
E aze down on my face, pop, lock n drop, ride the real winner
A gain McGuyver knocks, " Hey MSC can I join the Action?":smh:
D irty look:puke:, both twins start laughin :lol:" Awww poor McGuyver, he's not even Packin"

O ld wet behind da ears, musty lil negro, talkin bout pinky ballin u wit her dildoe:eek:
N ow its clear, guyver's a zero, no flow, cant draw nor fuck, take note of my memo:D

T uck ya dick in negro, :angry:let me spit, u was ethered when SHANE came n 2 rips:lol:
H ide behind his ballz, lil queer ass simp, afraid 2 get banned?:confused:, suck his bannana u chimps
I s Aristotle gay? With a title on his ass that says," ANAL GATEWAY", :puke:what can u say?
S icko Shane, I hope you c da text, this last verse, means your instantly next!:yes:


V ictory is key, vunerable Emcee, instantly insanity Readies me to recite Shanes's earthly Eulogy
E -cursed like a kennedy, Raped in his memory, Spinless as a centipede, Extinction is ur destiny
R espectfully i'll be tact n Saturate ur veins with ether laced fat, Explosive heart attack, dialated artifact
S innister stigmatic strains stripping Shane's senile sordid sanity sparadically, 10 second frames
E nlighten me?, just eat sperm cubes n maggots, as I sow your lips with barb wire, u silly lil faggot
 
WTF :confused: What's going on in here? Yall need a time-out!

Smile yall- now everybody stop crying and get back to rhymin :angry::)
uhmm did Izayoi just put us on time out?? :lol::lol::lol:



OH SHIT! My bad PO PO I forgot to turn the monster off. I thought you would have came back with a rhyme. I aint taking nothin serious.

And i never hesitated for the record. I said he was tough but i never hesitated.

and I'm out.

Why would I come back with a rhyme I clearly said I am NOT doing battle. I'll sit pon de sidelines I good. It woulda felt good to kick yo ass though. :yes:

Look check it right I gave you your props you done good for a man dat nevah liked poetry to begin wid. So big up yes....but in de end Shane came better.

Now get your ass to dropping mo rhymes..de battle goes on.
 
I'm tempted to join in but don't really know enough shit about anyone to spark a response.

Bredren if you in here with a name like butcher I expect to see blood splatter....yuh dun know..:yes:

Hold up hold up hold up...

Yo Shane! You a black cowboy now? :lol:

Fake ass hamburglar? Naw partner lyrical murderer
Want to know why they call me Pussy Krook? Ask your girl cause I serve her
I talk shit to make cats jump but ya'll too shook to act up
Fool my raps rough You'll get smacked up and ya'll boo will get snatched up
All these clowns and I got you cats trained its like I'm in the circus
But ain't putting my head in your mouth no matter how much ya'll ask fer it
I RSVP your girls jaws for that
Shane I'm guessing 'mod' stand for moderate after peepin all your raps

And if Raptor ES or MSC want it I got that ether
I rap to the death and leave so much devastation they'll have to call FEMA

Seems that PK has taken up arms against Shane....will Shane bow out and cower? Or will he will he take his slice of flesh.

S ilently slippin, my murda spits itchin in sadistic tension
H eated vision rippin & searin a love sick greek, I murked burnt benson
A ri's da bitch guyver used RX on, stamina spinnin, a butt fuck mission
N asty ninjaz nitpickin naturally like loose lip BGOL blunt bitchez
E asily I make both scorpio drip love venom, I long dicked um

I mma bend ova lady, face down ass up, slow lick her center
S lide n lick n flick n blow n pull, scorpio, slow beat or hard hitter?

D eep in her, I look up, damn those legs?.. :yes: its the twin sister
E aze down on my face, pop, lock n drop, ride the real winner
A gain McGuyver knocks, " Hey MSC can I join the Action?":smh:
D irty look:puke:, both twins start laughin :lol:" Awww poor McGuyver, he's not even Packin"

O ld wet behind da ears, musty lil negro, talkin bout pinky ballin u wit her dildoe:eek:
N ow its clear, guyver's a zero, no flow, cant draw nor fuck, take note of my memo:D

T uck ya dick in negro, :angry:let me spit, u was ethered when SHANE came n 2 rips:lol:
H ide behind his ballz, lil queer ass simp, afraid 2 get banned?:confused:, suck his bannana u chimps
I s Aristotle gay? With a title on his ass that says," ANAL GATEWAY", :puke:what can u say?
S icko Shane, I hope you c da text, this last verse, means your instantly next!:yes:


V ictory is key, vunerable Emcee, instantly insanity Readies me to recite Shanes's earthly Eulogy
E -cursed like a kennedy, Raped in his memory, Spinless as a centipede, Extinction is ur destiny
R espectfully i'll be tact n Saturate ur veins with ether laced fat, Explosive heart attack, dialated artifact
S innister stigmatic strains stripping Shane's senile sordid sanity sparadically, 10 second frames
E nlighten me?, just eat sperm cubes n maggots, as I sow your lips with barb wire, u silly lil faggot


Awww hell MSC you finished the verse....:eek: you came back for more :eek: you called it a Eulogy :eek: Damn...this can't end well....:lol:
 
Ho Ho Ho and Merry Christmas to all,
time for Shane to take the fall.

I fly to Baghdad this very night,
time to show Shane the light.

His poems are week, hes such a tool,
get him a dunce cap and stool.

He grabs his lines from a book,
what a dumb ass crook.

Born in 1978, a virgin still,
try the little blue pill.

To grab girls he took poetry class,
still cant get any ass.

I will keep this simple,
dude it might help to loose the pimple.

Its all good you can be my bizzle
time to go out with a sizzle.

If the girls say its true,
then I will give props where they are due.

I will say he is a better man than I,
after all Pikestreet came in his eye.


PS

Puzzy Krook you arent off the hook
cops are after you for the little girls you took.

Peace Im out, dude you have no clout.
 
:lol::lol: Raptor takes it on.....Shane and PK in one swoop....show no fear brothers.
Damn man Pikestreet....hhahahah:lol:
 
Yo Shane! You a black cowboy now? :lol:

Fake ass hamburglar? Naw partner lyrical murderer
Want to know why they call me Pussy Krook? Ask your girl cause I serve her
I talk shit to make cats jump but ya'll too shook to act up
Fool my raps rough You'll get smacked up and ya'll boo will get snatched up
All these clowns and I got you cats trained its like I'm in the circus
But ain't putting my head in your mouth no matter how much ya'll ask fer it
I RSVP your girls jaws for that
Shane I'm guessing 'mod' stand for moderate after peepin all your raps

And if Raptor ES or MSC want it I got that ether
I rap to the death and leave so much devastation they'll have to call FEMA

Go head Krook! I'm loving that.

.....

T uck ya dick in negro, :angry:let me spit, u was ethered when SHANE came n 2 rips:lol:
H ide behind his ballz, lil queer ass simp, afraid 2 get banned?:confused:, suck his bannana u chimps
I s Aristotle gay? With a title on his ass that says," ANAL GATEWAY", :puke:what can u say?
S icko Shane, I hope you c da text, this last verse, means your instantly next!:yes:

V ictory is key, vunerable Emcee, instantly insanity Readies me to recite Shanes's earthly Eulogy
E -cursed like a kennedy, Raped in his memory, Spinless as a centipede, Extinction is ur destiny
R espectfully i'll be tact n Saturate ur veins with ether laced fat, Explosive heart attack, dialated artifact
S innister stigmatic strains stripping Shane's senile sordid sanity sparadically, 10 second frames
E nlighten me?, just eat sperm cubes n maggots, as I sow your lips with barb wire, u silly lil faggot

^^^^ This man right here :dance::dance::dance:
I DEAD!


I'm tempted to join in but don't really know enough shit about anyone to spark a response.

Oh oh Mag B PLEASEEEEE.

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You know I hold you in the HIGHEST poetic regard, I can only imagine a rhyme from you would make me happier than this baby bunny! :yes::yes::yes:

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APB WORLD B FREE- I know you would be FIRE in here. Will you grace us World huh huh huh??????


uhmm did Izayoi just put us on time out?? :lol::lol::lol:

:lol: You know it's all love, all the time sista.


Ho Ho Ho and Merry Christmas to all,
time for Shane to take the fall.

I fly to Baghdad this very night,
time to show Shane the light.

His poems are week, hes such a tool,
get him a dunce cap and stool.

He grabs his lines from a book,
what a dumb ass crook.

Born in 1978, a virgin still,
try the little blue pill.

To grab girls he took poetry class,
still cant get any ass.

I will keep this simple,
dude it might help to loose the pimple.

Its all good you can be my bizzle
time to go out with a sizzle.

If the girls say its true,
then I will give props where they are due.

I will say he is a better man than I,
after all Pikestreet came in his eye.



PS

Puzzy Krook you arent off the hook
cops are after you for the little girls you took.

Peace Im out, dude you have no clout.

:eek: Uh oh Shane, Raptor hit you with the Pikesweet !
 
In the tradition of Broken language . . . . . :cool:

Raptor
the gayporn actor,
The faggot ass clapper
The fudge packer
The Tyler perry dick smasher
The feces stacker
The gay pride parade pimp macker
The Ock with the manhammer
Got caught with a tranny by a cellphone Camera
The lover with no stanima

When Shane is the
long dick her
Stick sticker
clit licker
dark thigh flipper
Tall n thick hitter
ass kicker
The street sweeper, heat seeker
he's weaker, a muppet like beeker
I'm the emotion in words
The action in Verbs
The Chronic in Herb
I'm the slip in your anti lock brakes in a swerve
I'm the Dave Mathew's space between
The Nightmares and your dreams, acting dummy or an ancient chariot's lean

ES
The brown boy
The Kinggrownman pound toy
Say Oi
The batty Bwoy
The Brian pumper humper
The pull down his pants and show her his tiny stumper
The bloody stool dump dumper
The to catch a predator male rump rumper
The penis pump stunter
The backfield punter
The wrong baseball team bunter
The Ayotala of all that is ass
The kid who could have fucked Ciara but passed
The shit talker big chatter on hrs of love making but can't last
The gay mag stash
The fag I just put on blast
 
Breaking that down for a minute..........Damn see this verse right here killed it for me :yes::yes::yes: damn shane you craaazy... Raptor what you gonna do about this man....you gonna let this man call you a fag?? You gonna take that ? Come forward man kick his ass :D

When Shane is the
long dick her
Stick sticker
clit licker
dark thigh flipper
Tall n thick hitter
ass kicker
The street sweeper, heat seeker
he's weaker, a muppet like beeker
I'm the emotion in words
The action in Verbs
The Chronic in Herb:eek:
I'm the slip in your anti lock brakes in a swerve (WOW)
I'm the Dave Mathew's space between
The Nightmares and your dreams
,
acting dummy or an ancient chariot's lean
 
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