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VOTE! - BGOL Halloween Horror Writing Contest 2!

VOTE! BGOL Halloween Horror Writing Contest

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godofwine

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Alright, we had four entries in the Halloween Horror Writing Contest. Read them all and vote on which one you like. I am going to have the voting open for 6 days to give folks a chance to read each story

Theme: Horror - Give us your best horror story.

Length: 3000 words max.

Prize: Highest scoring story gets a free year membership to BGOL paid by yours truly. In the event of a draw between two stories we'll hold a vote on just those two stories. Whichever one gets the highest score wins the free year membership.



First Prize:
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Dead River - Echelon
Second Prize:
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Party of the Year - Damian Stone
Third Prize:
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American Werewolf In Illinois - godofwine
Honorable Mention: Sweet Streams/Old Night - Mr MajestiK


The Entries Are:


Sweet Streams/Old Night - Written by Mr MajestiK
http://67.18.219.83/image_hosting/web_pages/godofwine77/BGOL_Revenge/Old_Night.pdf

http://issuu.com/agentechelon/docs/old_night - PDF

Party of the Year - Written by Damian Stone
http://67.18.219.83/image_hosting/web_pages/godofwine77/BGOL_Revenge/Party_of_the_Year1.pdf

http://issuu.com/agentechelon/docs/party_of_the_year1 - PDF

American Werewolf In Illinois - Written by Godofwine
http://67.18.219.83/image_hosting/w...GOL_Revenge/American_Werewolf_large_text1.pdf

http://issuu.com/agentechelon/docs/american_werewolf_in_illinois - PDF

Dead River - Written by Echelon
http://67.18.219.83/image_hosting/web_pages/godofwine77/BGOL_Revenge/Dead_River.pdf

http://issuu.com/agentechelon/docs/dead_river - PDF


The fam put a lot of work in to this. Take some time, give props, vote.
 
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Damn us writers get no love it seems lol

I will try to read the stories later, I had a rough night at work.
 
Damn! I'm gonna have fun reading the other entries.

Mad props to godofwine for promoting this and to the Mods for hitting it with the sticky. :yes::yes::yes:
 
Yeah, props to the mods, too for giving us a sticky for a little while. It kinda sucks if we're the only ones who end up voting, though. At the very least I hope a few other people get to read and like the stories, or even better, give us feedback. Feedback is always awesome. Gonna give these a read now. :yes:
 
melonpecan said:
Only two votes? :(


Hopefully after I do some homework and hair I can change that.
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I know. I haven't had a chance 2to read any, yet. Will get to it as soon as the Browns start losing tomorrow ...which should not take long
 
melonpecan said:
Only two votes? :(


Hopefully after I do some homework and hair I can change that.
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C'mon people!

I've read all of them.

They're all solid.

If this was some gossip thread heads would've made this 10 pages already.

Mad props to Melonpecan for stepping up to the plate to see what's up. Next time (if you can) take part in the competition as I'm sure heads would like to see horror/sci-fi/fantasy fiction written from a females perspective. (I know I would.)

We always crying about the lack of representation in Hollywood and shit but when some people get it together to put finger to keyboard on some creative shit no one peeps! :smh:
 
Here's my story.


Stalk, Stalk, Stalk, Stalk. Stalk!!!!!!!!!!!!


Stab, Stab, Stab, Stab, Stab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bleed, Bleed, Bleed, Bleed!!!!!!!!!!!!


Killed, Killed, Killed, Killed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Mr MajestiK said:
C'mon people!

I've read all of them.

They're all solid.

If this was some gossip thread heads would've made this 10 pages already.

Mad props to Melonpecan for stepping up to the plate to see what's up. Next time (if you can) take part in the competition as I'm sure heads would like to see horror/sci-fi/fantasy fiction written from a females perspective. (I know I would.)

We always crying about the lack of representation in Hollywood and shit but when some people get it together to put finger to keyboard on some creative shit no one peeps! :smh:
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c/s


Im going to work on a short story and have people give their opinions on it..Cant really do it now due to me not having a laptop of my own but I will participate when I do... :yes::yes:
 
ansatsusha_gouki said:
c/s


Im going to work on a short story and have people give their opinions on it..Cant really do it now due to me not having a laptop of my own but I will participate when I do... :yes::yes:
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I'd love to read whatever you may have written in the past as well as whatever you get to work on in the near future.

Writers gotta stay creating and appreciating the art. :yes::yes:
 
Mr MajestiK said:
I'd love to read whatever you may have written in the past as well as whatever you get to work on in the near future.

Writers gotta stay creating and appreciating the art. :yes::yes:
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http://www.bgol.us/board/showthread.php?t=427493


My story is "Lycaon" but Im going to revamp it because it wasnt good at all....

Lycaon is basically the book series Im working on but I want to write a few short stories so I can work on my punciation before I continue with my book..
 
ansatsusha_gouki said:
http://www.bgol.us/board/showthread.php?t=427493


My story is "Lycaon" but Im going to revamp it because it wasnt good at all....

Lycaon is basically the book series Im working on but I want to write a few short stories so I can work on my punctuation before I continue with my book..
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I'ma check it out right quick. :yes::yes:

EDIT: Just peeped and realized that it was one of the entries in one of the previous writing competitions.

You had some really good ideas in that story that could really do with developing into something really big.

If you need help, support or any pointers let me know. :yes:
 
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I just read one of these and, damn. There is some real talent here, no bullshit. I was caught up from start to finish. Dude. I spotted some punctuation issues, mostly lack of commas which led to run-on sentences, but I was thoroughly impressed.

I have two more to check out
 
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You know I think a lot of that is a consequence of the time restraint, which in itself was a large part of the fun for me. I'm sure other feel the same way. It was a test of figuring out where and what to sacrifice. It's funny though, that as I now have time to edit mine, it's a lot smoother than the version here. The challenge of it all is second only to the fun of reading the other stories.
 
Yes, it was a rushed thing but also fun to have such a deadline.
I realized also that I do work better under a deadline constraint.

By the way this 3 way tie is killing me lol.
 
I started mine from Maelstrom's contest last year, but it was never finished so I wanted to give those who had started from that contest a chance to finish theirs. After reading what I had written last year, I just started all the way over. It is amazing how much my writing has grown since last year. I showed this entry to a teacher I showed my Grizzly story to and she said the same thing. I'm STILL beaming.

I still have Party of the Year to read, but the other two were amazing. How can we have 350+ views and only 10 votes? I haven't voted, yet, but I will today after reading the last entry.

Oh, shit! I gotta get to work.
 
Damian Stone said:
Yes, it was a rushed thing but also fun to have such a deadline.
I realized also that I do work better under a deadline constraint.

By the way this 3 way tie is killing me lol.
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I rushed mine as well but still had a blast writing it though.

Shown it to a couple of people and have gotten really good feedback.

The 3 way tie is funny though.
 

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