what do yall think of my beats?

the beats are ok... they just sound too empty,like all you using is a drum machine and a keyboard....plus all of them got slow tempo...sounds like wu-tang beats from 1993...anyway since you from brooklyn and do music like me,i sent you a friend request.....keep doing ya thing and keep promoting ya self!
 
well, they sound like ideas for a beat, but these are not beats I think anyone would be able to use yet.
 
e-disco said:
the beats are ok... they just sound too empty,like all you using is a drum machine and a keyboard....plus all of them got slow tempo...sounds like wu-tang beats from 1993...anyway since you from brooklyn and do music like me,i sent you a friend request.....keep doing ya thing and keep promoting ya self!


absolutly right , i get the same feelin, besides speedin my beats up , what do u think is missing in my stlye , generally speakin with out goin the sample route
 
Very empty. Not on beat most of the time. Not enough drums in some, some dont have enough lows, no melodys, xyz. Honestly, I think you should give it up.
 
Pistol_Wippa45 said:
use fruity loops to make them less cartoonish. The sound good but they sound plain.

im using reason 3, tried to dl fruity loops n protools but it neva goes threw on my mac- i just started , like 4 mths ago, i know i aint dr. dre, im just tryna teach myself - not even familiar with all the technical :yes: stuff like 16/8/16/8/16 - would like to get better, so all opinions n pointers is well appreciated-- also these r just lil samples of my stuff , i neva claim these were finish products that im shoppin to the majors, just tryn build
 
The percussion on all of them sound way too basic, and unless you're going for a specific sound, you should utilize cymbals a lot more...

As far as the rest of your arrangements, you never use any chords, and the melodies are too repetitive.

Jazz Fest shows the most promise...if you put a decent beat behind it, it would actually sound professional. My advice to you would be to sample a drum break, loop it behind the track, and add two more different types of horns playing the same notes as the first one to give the track a "fuller" feel...
 
so add more chords spice up my melodies some different horns- what are lows, like when i bring in the song ? n end it , am i right , might sound stupid or out my league
 
the drums are weak, i think if you get some more realistic kicks and snares you will be on the right track..........
 
Sound like you pressed a blue button


























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I am fakking around...dont tek it personal


ya look like ya starting out cuz all of the above replies are on point....


But like all producers when ya starting out....8 months down the road ya going to be like wtf was I thinking


Just too basic right now...
 
rundatrack said:
Sound like you pressed a blue button


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I am fakking around...dont tek it personal


ya look like ya starting out cuz all of the above replies are on point....


But like all producers when ya starting out....8 months down the road ya going to be like wtf was I thinking


Just too basic right now...
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:lol: :lol: :lol: that shyt is halirious, i dont take nothing personnal , every producer started somewhere i just did mines backward got my publishing n writer with ascap n im just tryna be my own inhouse producer- what are chords?, like guitars,n violins, n do most song go 8 bars 16 8 16 or 16 8 16 8 :confused:
 
let me upgrade you here....
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Since u said u want honest critism....


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thats 1 reason i dont really fuk wit reason....

step ya game up if u seriously want to make beats invest in a MP since u got a MAC and a mackie.... if u dont kno wha these are hit goole hard and read EVERYTHING on the GUITAR CENTER website.... i mean EVERYTHING beacuse ur gonna need to kno your equipment as well as your specs.... kif u got any ?'s send a pm...... inm not coming back into this thread :smh: :hmm:
 
sayword! said:
let me upgrade you here....
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:lol: :lol: :lol: .... Nah Sun...whats really the problem here is that u have no basslines...u don't use any hi-hats...not layering your drums...i could continue...U need alot work man. :smh:
 
Indelible_01 said:
Nah Sun...whats really the problem here is that u have no basslines...u don't use any hi-hats...not layering your drums...i could continue...U need alot work man. :smh:

can u just explain " layering my drums" ,n some one give me an example of chords-i dont want to deal wit much hardware- wanna get the basics first -- thank 4 all comment :dance:
 
go to futureproducer.com and read up. listem to a dre intrumental and see how he does things, count his bars, see how he brings things in and out of his tracks. and take what you learn and flip it. and it's cool that your not sampling but listen to some old records. old classic soul, r&b, and hip hop. because your beats are a little wack but you have the drive to be good. i been producing for 6 years and I don't have my mysapce page up yet. so dont stop until you get enough.

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