London - One 2 Many New Video
- Thread starter Wuntyma
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MoB critique the vid man if he wants to rate himself so be it. Am SURE that there are others that do the same yes.
Wuntyma I didn't like it. It was more the song than anything else as I was listening and not watching the vid. I found it way too repetitive and the phone call with the friend kinda killed it for me.
Good luck with it though
peace
Wuntyma I didn't like it. It was more the song than anything else as I was listening and not watching the vid. I found it way too repetitive and the phone call with the friend kinda killed it for me.
Good luck with it though
peace
So not cool! So your rated your own post 5 stars. Self-praise stinks.
How do you know he did it?? Assumptions stink.
ummm
the song is aight
the phone call was a tad bit extra....and mean to the point it wasn't funny...especially since she was still there
and u were yellin but she didn't move which seemed unrealistic
and it kinda seems like u have 2 different videos going on...the one w/ all the special effects and the reg one..maybe if u can find some sort of segue/transition that u can bring u in and out of the two better
and the video overpowered the song in my opinion, literally, some parts i couldn't hear u the vocalist over the music
and the hook is too repetitive
its a start, just needs some touching up IMO
wish you much luck
the song is aight
the phone call was a tad bit extra....and mean to the point it wasn't funny...especially since she was still there
and u were yellin but she didn't move which seemed unrealistic
and it kinda seems like u have 2 different videos going on...the one w/ all the special effects and the reg one..maybe if u can find some sort of segue/transition that u can bring u in and out of the two better
and the video overpowered the song in my opinion, literally, some parts i couldn't hear u the vocalist over the music
and the hook is too repetitive
its a start, just needs some touching up IMO
wish you much luck
I have to concur with everyone else regarding the phone call...to me it was too long and a little unrealistic. That girl must sleep like the dead not to hear the barbs aimed at her like that. Still, good effort.
I did find that there was too much disparity between the FX shots and the live shots...they didnt mesh.
As a videographer myself, I'd suggest doing at least two more shoots in different locations (one might be a rehash of the night in question, complete with vertigo shots of him getting sloshed) and add them in, just to jazz things up a little.
Keep pluggin' away, bredren
I did find that there was too much disparity between the FX shots and the live shots...they didnt mesh.
As a videographer myself, I'd suggest doing at least two more shoots in different locations (one might be a rehash of the night in question, complete with vertigo shots of him getting sloshed) and add them in, just to jazz things up a little.
Keep pluggin' away, bredren
MoB critique the vid man if he wants to rate himself so be it. Am SURE that there are others that do the same yes.
Wuntyma I didn't like it. It was more the song than anything else as I was listening and not watching the vid. I found it way too repetitive and the phone call with the friend kinda killed it for me.
Good luck with it though
peace
Sorry hun I got distracted seeing 5 stars and no one had responded. But he wasn't being picked on I nail all posters that I see do that. Let the masses judge.
However your assesment on the video is correct. The vid needs a lot of work. The song needs to be remixed the music needs to be lowered or raise the volume level of the vocalist.
Then to be saggin is about as ghetto as it gets (that shit is tired) and he definately needs to lose the phone conversation.
Damn I got a lot of ideas from this, thanks a lot y'all.
My crew and I are shooting a different version as we speak, so maybe it would be better.
But the consensus is saying take off the phone call, and we will.
Lets just say this was the uncut version not the official video.
Thanks again ppl
My crew and I are shooting a different version as we speak, so maybe it would be better.
But the consensus is saying take off the phone call, and we will.
Lets just say this was the uncut version not the official video.
Thanks again ppl
Damn I got a lot of ideas from this, thanks a lot y'all.
My crew and I are shooting a different version as we speak, so maybe it would be better.
But the consensus is saying take off the phone call, and we will.
Lets just say this was the uncut version not the official video.
Thanks again ppl
Please allow us to see the new version Wuntyma. It would be interesting to see what you have done to improve things.
Peace