Ladies, I need your critiques again (promo vid)
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Women are worse than men
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But I like your chocolate body.I couldn't just have you dancing on me like that,we would have to fuck(excuse my vulgarness).
.But I like your chocolate body.I couldn't just have you dancing on me like that,we would have to fuck(excuse my vulgarness).
Women are worse than men
But I like your chocolate body.I couldn't just have you dancing on me like that,we would have to fuck(excuse my vulgarness).
My sista....
If this is really you,
Your body is
I like your height, skin colour, butt and you look to be packing about 8-9 inches(?)
Overall i''d give you a 8.5/10If you want a 10/10...p.m. me pics of your dick
lawd yall some pimps yes
O. M. G.
*Where is that damn drooling smiley?*
. . . damn you are sexy. . . I enjoyed the video and I normally HATE stuff like that.
I think we should get some exclusive pics for critiquing your work
Yall ladies silly....
Panther good promo.....your body is pure niceness
So when is the SOL private show?
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if thats u...you are very yummy
if thats just a promo tape...i would say u need to shorten it...no need for it to be 5mins...they will decide if they like you are not within the first couple of minutes
use text to put your information in the beginning and end of the tape so whoever watches the video knows how to get a hold of u....not to mention the people on youtube (id put an email/myspace address personally)
all of your "action" shots are of u humping females. nothing wrong with that...but show some more of you dancing aside from having sex with clothes on. not saying women dont wanna see that cause obviously we do...but it was beginning to get redundant with the same positions...i found myself enjoying the short snippets when u were dancing alone better
if thats just a promo tape...i would say u need to shorten it...no need for it to be 5mins...they will decide if they like you are not within the first couple of minutes
use text to put your information in the beginning and end of the tape so whoever watches the video knows how to get a hold of u....not to mention the people on youtube (id put an email/myspace address personally)
all of your "action" shots are of u humping females. nothing wrong with that...but show some more of you dancing aside from having sex with clothes on. not saying women dont wanna see that cause obviously we do...but it was beginning to get redundant with the same positions...i found myself enjoying the short snippets when u were dancing alone better
if thats u...you are very yummy
if thats just a promo tape...i would say u need to shorten it...no need for it to be 5mins...they will decide if they like you are not within the first couple of minutes
use text to put your information in the beginning and end of the tape so whoever watches the video knows how to get a hold of u....not to mention the people on youtube (id put an email/myspace address personally)
all of your "action" shots are of u humping females. nothing wrong with that...but show some more of you dancing aside from having sex with clothes on. not saying women dont wanna see that cause obviously we do...but it was beginning to get redundant with the same positions...i found myself enjoying the short snippets when u were dancing alone better
You are the only one who really critiqued it.
I appreciate the breakdown. I really didn't want to add to many graphics to the video(contact info, other text) out of fear of making it look cheesy. I had the orginal promo at around 2 1/2 to 3 minutes, but a wanted the testimonials in there.if thats u...you are very yummy
if thats just a promo tape...i would say u need to shorten it...no need for it to be 5mins...they will decide if they like you are not within the first couple of minutes
use text to put your information in the beginning and end of the tape so whoever watches the video knows how to get a hold of u....not to mention the people on youtube (id put an email/myspace address personally)
all of your "action" shots are of u humping females. nothing wrong with that...but show some more of you dancing aside from having sex with clothes on. not saying women dont wanna see that cause obviously we do...but it was beginning to get redundant with the same positions...i found myself enjoying the short snippets when u were dancing alone better
Thank you for the compliment. I try to be more seductive and respectful than raunchy, even though I do get raunchier than the video shows.
im sorry...wait what? what was ur question?
but nah seriously...nice promo
do you have a specialty move?
that was pretty tame...i've seen some off the wall shit b4 (and i only went one time)
ur body is great........nyyyyccceee
If this is really you,
Your body is
I like your height, skin colour, butt and you look to be packing about 8-9 inches(?)
Overall i''d give you a 8.5/10
Don't start none
Women are worse than men
But I like your chocolate body.I couldn't just have you dancing on me like that,we would have to fuck(excuse my vulgarness).
Glad you liked it
*Where is that damn drooling smiley?*
. . . damn you are sexy. . . I enjoyed the video and I normally HATE stuff like that.
I think we should get some exclusive pics for critiquing your work
I don't think I normally talk like that. Only when I'm in Miami.Pantha you already know! I'm a big fan. Thought you were West African all this time, but your voice sounds straight outta Flawda
I might have to work on that.My sista....
lawd yall some pimps yes
Yall ladies silly....
Panther good promo.....your body is pure niceness
So when is the SOL private show?
Glad you liked it
I don't think I normally talk like that. Only when I'm in Miami.
I might have to work on that.
Let me break it down for you a minute Panther.....you ARE going to work on it. Ok that is all. Carry on wit ur sexy ass
Ummmm, that was ummmmm yeah and ummmmm then you looking ummmmmm damn!
*fans self*
*fans self*
it wont be cheesy if its done tastfully...comercials on tv do it all the time
if u are serious about marketing/promotions u need to take every step to make sure that people can get a hold of u if they are interested in your work
I feel you. I've never been that good at selling myself. I think I lack a certain amount of necessary arrogance.
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