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I just read the preview and its kind of hard for me to judge if its good or not. The Script has me interested but not enough to buy it. You may need to tweak the dialog a bit.

Can u give us a summery on what the story is about?
 
I just read the preview and its kind of hard for me to judge if its good or not. The Script has me interested but not enough to buy it. You may need to tweak the dialog a bit.

Can u give us a summery on what the story is about?

I was going to say the same thing. Also, you should try www.zudaonline.com to get more feedback from more comic readers.
 
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