Can I Get Some Feed Back On This Trailer Im Working On!!!
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A little color correction needed. But other than that, it's technically sound. What you using....Avid or FCP?
I probably would have done the "Larceny" title effect differently though. Maybe letting the keyframing for the word stay the same and once it's last keyframe, do a fade in dissolve for the word "Entertainment." Some how having the entertainment keyframed with larceny doesn't look right. Almost takes away from the word larceny having it travel down the screen with larceny.
that looks like soho. im not a video guru. but uh im so used to watching cartoon network and mtv, but maybe a lil more animation in your graphics and flashing colors or something lol....maybe i shoulda just sed nothing....
what about the filming?
TakeThaShot said:
Agree. My sentiments exactly. It was too bunched together and I could barely read what it said at the bottom. Have it fade in the same way you did the Outro just without the black screen.
I cant get to far into the vid b/c youtube keeps stallin'.
But what I would do is fade the title in with just the music, then soon as dude starts rappin', bam picture with maybe a flash transition,
yeah I know flash transitions is played but I dont give a f*ck.
But what I would do is fade the title in with just the music, then soon as dude starts rappin', bam picture with maybe a flash transition,
yeah I know flash transitions is played but I dont give a f*ck.
Nice work man. I think your text is a lil to big and the fades are to slow.
The Shout Outs Take to much of the Trailer, thats some after the trailer stuff. Not Before.
yellowmello said:
Also, Spread your tracking out in the text a little bit more.....maybe to a 4.02. The word Silkk is too bunched up. You can barely see the difference between the "i" and the "L". And if you're going to make the last name a smaller font than the first name, make it significantly smaller.
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FUCKYOU said:
not bad dawg.....avid is a good system..the sync is a lil off but nothing big....id cut some of that real mf's talking part know....they dont need that much play G...but otherwise IMPRESSED...im out her ein the chi usng ADOBE PREMIERE>..im bout to edit a CHITOWN bears hglights to >........BALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLING...jim jones..i found all the games off demonoid and now im bout to load the .avi's to adobe and cut that shyt up...ill load it up to here when im finished....hoping these nikkas finish it off right
a trailer highlights the key moment of the video/movie
let the picture do the talking... have a main track playing... and a narrator give a little insight..
check out tyler perry's daddy little girl trailer.. it tell a story without giving away too much.. u want to be able to create a buzz not just half ass it u know?
also check out shyt what the name of the that trailer... u might have to google it but it was for belly...
your clip is more like a behind the scene shyt.. save that for the dvd
fix the graphics text message.. u will drive deaf people crazy with it
what kind of camera are u using?
software???
practice makes better.. dont let the naysayers bring u down.. keep rising... and do that shyt man
some cat just got $2 million dollar from sundance for a simple ass horror flick lol
let the picture do the talking... have a main track playing... and a narrator give a little insight..
check out tyler perry's daddy little girl trailer.. it tell a story without giving away too much.. u want to be able to create a buzz not just half ass it u know?
also check out shyt what the name of the that trailer... u might have to google it but it was for belly...
your clip is more like a behind the scene shyt.. save that for the dvd
fix the graphics text message.. u will drive deaf people crazy with it
what kind of camera are u using?
software???
practice makes better.. dont let the naysayers bring u down.. keep rising... and do that shyt man
some cat just got $2 million dollar from sundance for a simple ass horror flick lol
1. The cuts are too long.
2. Up your Avid FX skills! (animate the titles)
3. They are talking about nothing. The trailer needs a theme.
Seems you have enough footage for a good trailer, but as stated before it shouldn't be longer than one minute. And it needs a theme...
2. Up your Avid FX skills! (animate the titles)
3. They are talking about nothing. The trailer needs a theme.
Seems you have enough footage for a good trailer, but as stated before it shouldn't be longer than one minute. And it needs a theme...
Anikulapo said:
Every thing he said... make the title text fade in at the being where the black screen is so it stands out. When you look at music videos the cuts are fast.
check this out.. I did this last summer with a cheap ass cam.
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shit is pretty long. and cut out a lot of the talking. but its straight though.
I think its decent but cut out that talking in the beginning and focus more on the story of the movie. keep doing your thang though bro. I make movies also and here is a promo clip of my movie " THE LIFE- SEX, DRUGS & VIOLENCE". www.lbproductions.biz
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damn lb that trailer of yours is fucking good mannnn.. hell that what i am talking about.... shyt i am gonna purchase that mofo...
that what a good trailer do.. make u really interest to buy it...
that what a good trailer do.. make u really interest to buy it...
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