yall better get dirty in here.....
Ons you KNOW Owl said you do NOT want anything with him right
you gonna let that fly....
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ANY GIVEN SUNDAY. Onslaught vs OWL
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yall better get dirty in here.....
Ons you KNOW Owl said you do NOT want anything with him right
you gonna let that fly....
Seventies Sun, so we start easy like sunday morning,
worshiping Self, as i applaud the Cosmos that i yawned in,
stretching solar serenades
libations to ladies across the nation
as they bask in my glory,
mary's of magdelene soak my feet in christian dior,
...rubbing my corns...
*
*
Not prince or the bangles,
but i prepare the many for manic mondays
reciprocation to those that soothe souls like moon rays...
rolling robed in ritual red, tuesday, i'm the god of martians,
inciting destruction in Onslaught's psychic departments,
picture the scene of him being consulted by a Black Jack Kevorkian...
...wednesday, i'm woden to rome's wandering genius'
the terms take turns stroking, penetrating, philosophical penis,
particle's of speech create scenes fluid like mercury seducing venus...
thursday, i'm king of the norse,
keystrokes combined to sever heads are my sword,
a digital demigod exposing the achilles heel, like a hacker viewing source...
The homies honor the Hero, so friday's my day of sabbath,
as the women salat in a forbidden pattern,
paying obeisance to the civilizer of the online savage...
worshiping Self, as i applaud the Cosmos that i yawned in,
stretching solar serenades
libations to ladies across the nation
as they bask in my glory,
mary's of magdelene soak my feet in christian dior,
...rubbing my corns...
*
*Not prince or the bangles,
but i prepare the many for manic mondays
reciprocation to those that soothe souls like moon rays...
rolling robed in ritual red, tuesday, i'm the god of martians,
inciting destruction in Onslaught's psychic departments,
picture the scene of him being consulted by a Black Jack Kevorkian...
...wednesday, i'm woden to rome's wandering genius'
the terms take turns stroking, penetrating, philosophical penis,
particle's of speech create scenes fluid like mercury seducing venus...
thursday, i'm king of the norse,
keystrokes combined to sever heads are my sword,
a digital demigod exposing the achilles heel, like a hacker viewing source...
The homies honor the Hero, so friday's my day of sabbath,
as the women salat in a forbidden pattern,
paying obeisance to the civilizer of the online savage...
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I'm gonna keep this straight to the point and bloody....
I don't rest like GOD for ONE DAY - I'm a demon who spits fire out his lungs, ON ANY GIVEN SUNDAY
ON MONDAY, I decide to take it slow, tie your ass to the hood of a car - speedin' down a ONE WAY
TUESDAY, stab you with stiletto heel from a model bitch on a RUNWAY - Call it a DONE DAY
The NEXT DAY, which is WEDNESDAY - take you to the ESES, have you thrown OFF the EXPRESS WAY
THURSDAY as I jump from over the HUMP DAY, I begin to get THIRSTAY - for blood in the WORST WAY
Call it PATTY HEARST DAY - 'Cause I'M kidnappin' your ASS
Cut you 'til you bleed out - into a WHISKEY FLASK
Then I drink your blood - Yes, PSYCHOPATH NIGGA
FRIDAY, have you delve - into your PAST NIGGA
Brainwashin' Owl - 'til he thinks he's a WIGGA
SATURDAY inject - rat DNA in his LIVER
Turn this predator to PREY - in the corner he SHiVERS
Cycled back to the FIRST DAY - turnin' SUNDAY into SONDAY
'Cause Owl left incapacitated - in an INERT WAY
Scorpio twins - pray he stay away from ME
So I don't turn his bird ass - into a crash DUMMIE
...
I don't rest like GOD for ONE DAY - I'm a demon who spits fire out his lungs, ON ANY GIVEN SUNDAY
ON MONDAY, I decide to take it slow, tie your ass to the hood of a car - speedin' down a ONE WAY
TUESDAY, stab you with stiletto heel from a model bitch on a RUNWAY - Call it a DONE DAY
The NEXT DAY, which is WEDNESDAY - take you to the ESES, have you thrown OFF the EXPRESS WAY
THURSDAY as I jump from over the HUMP DAY, I begin to get THIRSTAY - for blood in the WORST WAY
Call it PATTY HEARST DAY - 'Cause I'M kidnappin' your ASS
Cut you 'til you bleed out - into a WHISKEY FLASK
Then I drink your blood - Yes, PSYCHOPATH NIGGA
FRIDAY, have you delve - into your PAST NIGGA
Brainwashin' Owl - 'til he thinks he's a WIGGA
SATURDAY inject - rat DNA in his LIVER
Turn this predator to PREY - in the corner he SHiVERS
Cycled back to the FIRST DAY - turnin' SUNDAY into SONDAY
'Cause Owl left incapacitated - in an INERT WAY
Scorpio twins - pray he stay away from ME
So I don't turn his bird ass - into a crash DUMMIE
...
I'm gonna keep this straight to the point and bloody....
I don't rest like GOD for ONE DAY - I'm a demon who spits fire out his lungs, ON ANY GIVEN SUNDAY
ON MONDAY, I decide to take it slow, tie your ass to the hood of a car - speedin' down a ONE WAY
TUESDAY, stab you with stiletto heel from a model bitch on a RUNWAY - Call it a DONE DAY
The NEXT DAY, which is WEDNESDAY - take you to the ESES, have you thrown OFF the EXPRESS WAY
THURSDAY as I jump from over the HUMP DAY, I begin to get THIRSTAY - for blood in the WORST WAY
Call it PATTY HEARST DAY - 'Cause I'M kidnappin' your ASS
Cut you 'til you bleed out - into a WHISKEY FLASK
Then I drink your blood - Yes, PSYCHOPATH NIGGA
FRIDAY, have you delve - into your PAST NIGGA
Brainwashin' Owl - 'til he thinks he's a WIGGA
SATURDAY inject - rat DNA in his LIVER
Turn this predator to PREY - in the corner he SHiVERS
Cycled back to the FIRST DAY - turnin' SUNDAY into SONDAY
'Cause Owl left incapacitated - in an INERT WAY
Scorpio twins - pray he stay away from ME
So I don't turn his bird ass - into a crash DUMMIE
About time negro I almost gave up on you.
Let the congregation be seated...
As we open up our book of bloody bastards,
sanskrit verses, dirt filled chapters
"onslaught"...wow...(only in the mind of the infantile)
(please, calm the laughter)
Listen
we not here to discuss guns that you ain't shot,
better yet,
don't compare your rhymes to pussy that you ain't popped...
pussy...
i give them time to rewind it,
hit the panic button, and [edit],
allow the nervous space to refine it,
while i'm in they mama's mouth
foot on a broken couch...about to recline it out,
quit examining the concepts and how they're written,
digging through my post on an expose mission
exposure would only bring me closer to the vision
fuck nigga...
i was born stark naked...screaming and pissing,
On all given days, you're a victim in my verbal prison
while the poster is analyzing my posting style,
i'm at the postal service securing post on his dead child...
i know the moths in your stomach are tearing the lining up,
i'm trying run through the board by Sunday,
mutha'fucka could you please hurry up,
owl got him on pause like stalled traffic,
...all the women are on the floor, but you're playing the wall sadly...
had to slow it down to match the speed of your content...
he wrote two rhymes, studied the locals, and this the bullshit posted
the delivery, ehh, a six on a scale to eleven,
nothing creative, a description of a homo-thug's heaven
...typical popsicle response...
i'll take an exacto knife, slice the coronary artieries right out of ya
and host sean and chi at my house, serving them chicken marsala...
On any given Sunday...just not this week,folks...
...let's this get htis shit over with, let me get the next topic...
As we open up our book of bloody bastards,
sanskrit verses, dirt filled chapters
"onslaught"...wow...(only in the mind of the infantile)
(please, calm the laughter)
Listen
we not here to discuss guns that you ain't shot,
better yet,
don't compare your rhymes to pussy that you ain't popped...
pussy...
i give them time to rewind it,
hit the panic button, and [edit],
allow the nervous space to refine it,
while i'm in they mama's mouth
foot on a broken couch...about to recline it out,
quit examining the concepts and how they're written,
digging through my post on an expose mission
exposure would only bring me closer to the vision
fuck nigga...
i was born stark naked...screaming and pissing,
On all given days, you're a victim in my verbal prison
while the poster is analyzing my posting style,
i'm at the postal service securing post on his dead child...
i know the moths in your stomach are tearing the lining up,
i'm trying run through the board by Sunday,
mutha'fucka could you please hurry up,
owl got him on pause like stalled traffic,
...all the women are on the floor, but you're playing the wall sadly...
had to slow it down to match the speed of your content...
he wrote two rhymes, studied the locals, and this the bullshit posted
the delivery, ehh, a six on a scale to eleven,
nothing creative, a description of a homo-thug's heaven
...typical popsicle response...
i'll take an exacto knife, slice the coronary artieries right out of ya
and host sean and chi at my house, serving them chicken marsala...
On any given Sunday...just not this week,folks...
...let's this get htis shit over with, let me get the next topic...
Heating up...
Just woke up, insomnia is kickin' my ass. Tried to sleep for a bit but guess I can't correct this shit on my own...
Blah, blah, blah nigga - you done yappin' YET???
Thanks for the AYN RAND series - did you record it off of CASSETTE?
I'm a VET, you a VET - why you still buildin' up your REP?
Owls are nocturnal animals - only come out after SUNSET
Slay you like Osiris in sunlit morning - as he does to SET
Change my mindset to beating you - you switch over as BAD DEBT
Now back to the battle....
Owl the Nocturnal Thread TERRORIST?...
Dude I don't need guns to do the killin' - beat your ass bloody with my BARE FIST
Tupac's your avatar - nigga you need a THERAPIST
Dude was raped, shot and killed- how fuckin' EMBARRASSIN'
Like him - do you go by two different ALIASES?
He went by MC New York - you go by MC OEDIPUS
MOTHERFUCKER - step back before I put more EMPHASIS
On your REFERENCES - 'Cause your esoteric lyrics don't make no fucking SENSE
Now stick to the fuckin' TOPIC
It's bout how I kill you every day of the week - not about your fuckin' BIOPIC
STOP IT - While you feedin' niggas chicken MARSALA
MONDAY, got suicide BOMBERS - outside your door recruited by OSAMA
Screamin' MASHA ALLAH, ALLAHU AKBAR - GOD's the GREATEST
They talkin' bout me on TUESDAY - Nigga's mourn you on your BELATED
WEDNESDAY, call it END DAY - beat you like a student in my dojo and I'm your SENSAI
THURSDAY, call it HEARSE DAY - Funeral arrangements made while your spirit cryin' out for MERCAY (MERCY)
FRIDAY - call it DIE DAY - your wig gets pushed SIDEWAYS like roadkill crushed on HIGHWAYS
SATURDAY - call it LATTER DAY - mormon saints can't even save you from becomin' a BATTERED SLAVE
SUNDAY - call it ONE DAY - 'cause ONE DAY you'll win but right now you got a ticket to hell, and it's ONE WAY
I don't examine your past rhymes - your content is OBSOLETE
You get born like SUNDAY - while I bask in your DEFEAT
Have you do a HEATH - and sign over your soul on my LEDGER
You a JOKER - BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN with roughridin' PLEASURES
Of being in the kitchen cookin' - bitches and niggas DISHES
While I bury you with your apron on - faced down in dirt DITCHES
Blah, blah, blah nigga - you done yappin' YET???Thanks for the AYN RAND series - did you record it off of CASSETTE?
I'm a VET, you a VET - why you still buildin' up your REP?
Owls are nocturnal animals - only come out after SUNSET
Slay you like Osiris in sunlit morning - as he does to SET
Change my mindset to beating you - you switch over as BAD DEBT
Now back to the battle....
Owl the Nocturnal Thread TERRORIST?...
Dude I don't need guns to do the killin' - beat your ass bloody with my BARE FIST
Tupac's your avatar - nigga you need a THERAPIST
Dude was raped, shot and killed- how fuckin' EMBARRASSIN'
Like him - do you go by two different ALIASES?
He went by MC New York - you go by MC OEDIPUS
MOTHERFUCKER - step back before I put more EMPHASIS
On your REFERENCES - 'Cause your esoteric lyrics don't make no fucking SENSE
Now stick to the fuckin' TOPIC
It's bout how I kill you every day of the week - not about your fuckin' BIOPIC
STOP IT - While you feedin' niggas chicken MARSALA
MONDAY, got suicide BOMBERS - outside your door recruited by OSAMA
Screamin' MASHA ALLAH, ALLAHU AKBAR - GOD's the GREATEST
They talkin' bout me on TUESDAY - Nigga's mourn you on your BELATED
WEDNESDAY, call it END DAY - beat you like a student in my dojo and I'm your SENSAI
THURSDAY, call it HEARSE DAY - Funeral arrangements made while your spirit cryin' out for MERCAY (MERCY)
FRIDAY - call it DIE DAY - your wig gets pushed SIDEWAYS like roadkill crushed on HIGHWAYS
SATURDAY - call it LATTER DAY - mormon saints can't even save you from becomin' a BATTERED SLAVE
SUNDAY - call it ONE DAY - 'cause ONE DAY you'll win but right now you got a ticket to hell, and it's ONE WAY
I don't examine your past rhymes - your content is OBSOLETE
You get born like SUNDAY - while I bask in your DEFEAT
Have you do a HEATH - and sign over your soul on my LEDGER
You a JOKER - BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN with roughridin' PLEASURES
Of being in the kitchen cookin' - bitches and niggas DISHES
While I bury you with your apron on - faced down in dirt DITCHES
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First drops.....not bad...but not bloody enough
Second drops seems like you both got your acts together and went in for the kill.
Gonna go with Owl on this one cuz he was more consistent with the vibe.
Onslaught the second drop started off excellent but kinda fell off at the end.
Excellent work so far Lions.
Second drops seems like you both got your acts together and went in for the kill.
Gonna go with Owl on this one cuz he was more consistent with the vibe.
Onslaught the second drop started off excellent but kinda fell off at the end.
Excellent work so far Lions.
Damn I must have fucked up somewhere...Like I said from the beginnin' in the Lion's Den thread, I haven't been myself in a while, but I tried. Mc, put in some input so I can build off of it...you too LS...SPECIFIC INPUT THANK YOU.
Owl did great, I just tried to make mine a little more lyrical, believe me, it sounds hella better when I spit it, but that's not possible in these threads. Maybe that can be an option or another topic in the future.
Anyway, thank y'all, I haven't written in a while.
Owl did great, I just tried to make mine a little more lyrical, believe me, it sounds hella better when I spit it, but that's not possible in these threads. Maybe that can be an option or another topic in the future.
Anyway, thank y'all, I haven't written in a while.
OK
your style with the hypens I no like. You adopted that from one of the battles with me and stuck with it. I think it threw your rhymes off honestly go back to the roots when we first battled.
THanks for that...I'll try something a little different the next time.
Ons, the way you were reading that to me was so much better than how it came out on here. But I agree with Mcguyver the hyphens threw me off a little. But good job baby.
Good battle.
Owl's first rhyme was ight but was a tedious read. Onz reply went hard but i sensed he was holding back for round 2.
Owl's second came off vicious. More succinct. Onz came back on some "fuck u think you tryna impress with that esoteric shit?"
Intro part was mad disrespectful (loved it! LOL) but it kinda tapered off at the end.
Very very close. Owl. By a photo-finish.
Good shit.
Owl's first rhyme was ight but was a tedious read. Onz reply went hard but i sensed he was holding back for round 2.
Owl's second came off vicious. More succinct. Onz came back on some "fuck u think you tryna impress with that esoteric shit?
" Intro part was mad disrespectful (loved it! LOL) but it kinda tapered off at the end.
Very very close. Owl. By a photo-finish.
Good shit.
Good battle.
Owl's first rhyme was ight but was a tedious read. Onz reply went hard but i sensed he was holding back for round 2.
Owl's second came off vicious. More succinct. Onz came back on some "fuck u think you tryna impress with that esoteric shit?
Intro part was mad disrespectful (loved it! LOL) but it kinda tapered off at the end.
Very very close. Owl. By a photo-finish.
Good shit.
Log on to messenger sean.
ONSSSSSSSSS!!!!
Good shit...
Vicious.
i was hoping for something more conceptual from you in the first verse, i know you read a lot, but hey, my pref, right? Your lines were bland, not a lot visuals. I really went for a play on the topic, so i did the god thing, which is the basis of the names of the week, i noticed i inspired a few around here, but what can say, nature of the threat...
i didn't like my second one at all, just too "OWL", nothing really special but me talking slick...Your second one was direct, i knew you were going to get personal(...how personal can you get with an online persona?...), it's the nature of a battle to flesh out your opponent eventually...i thought the flow, the rhythm, was right, which is something i need to work on...i wish we were going three rounds, now...i owe you one...
Good shit...
Vicious.
i was hoping for something more conceptual from you in the first verse, i know you read a lot, but hey, my pref, right? Your lines were bland, not a lot visuals. I really went for a play on the topic, so i did the god thing, which is the basis of the names of the week, i noticed i inspired a few around here, but what can say, nature of the threat...
i didn't like my second one at all, just too "OWL", nothing really special but me talking slick...Your second one was direct, i knew you were going to get personal(...how personal can you get with an online persona?...), it's the nature of a battle to flesh out your opponent eventually...i thought the flow, the rhythm, was right, which is something i need to work on...i wish we were going three rounds, now...i owe you one...
Damn fam, not even one vote man?...
Hangs head low and walks out into the shadows...
Awwww.....
Damn fam, not even one vote man?...
Hangs head low and walks out into the shadows...
sowwie..
Damn fam, not even one vote man?...
Hangs head low and walks out into the shadows...
Negro please you better than that, you tried something and it didn't work. It aint like you just started and what you just dropped was all you know.
[ladyscorp instigating]now get back to the drawing board I heard owl saying he went through you like bigirl goes through a carton of cigarettes.[/ladyscorps instigating]
I liked Ons grit. He tried to run with the ball straight up the middle on Owl and got some tough yards inside so to speak.
Owl's style just seemed to do more damage than Ons. Ons had hot lines but it rambled a little bit. Owl rambled from line to line but overall he caught up to himself and ultimately gave a clearer concept from start to finish.
But I can't let Ons go out like this because dude had better skill than the vote is giving him credit for. Nobody should go 0-fer in the Lion's Den.
Owl's style just seemed to do more damage than Ons. Ons had hot lines but it rambled a little bit. Owl rambled from line to line but overall he caught up to himself and ultimately gave a clearer concept from start to finish.
But I can't let Ons go out like this because dude had better skill than the vote is giving him credit for. Nobody should go 0-fer in the Lion's Den.
I liked Ons grit. He tried to run with the ball straight up the middle on Owl and got some tough yards inside so to speak.
Owl's style just seemed to do more damage than Ons. Ons had hot lines but it rambled a little bit. Owl rambled from line to line but overall he caught up to himself and ultimately gave a clearer concept from start to finish.
But I can't let Ons go out like this because dude had better skill than the vote is giving him credit for. Nobody should go 0-fer in the Lion's Den.
Fuk you doin! he's a motherfukin lion, we have no time to lick wounds (just wombs
) we shake shit off and attack. Your Den pass is suspended for 24hrs.BTW: I gotta check out the Den.
Same could be said for your rhymes, but I feel you...I liked Ons grit. He tried to run with the ball straight up the middle on Owl and got some tough yards inside so to speak.
Owl's style just seemed to do more damage than Ons. Ons had hot lines but it rambled a little bit. Owl rambled from line to line but overall he caught up to himself and ultimately gave a clearer concept from start to finish.
But I can't let Ons go out like this because dude had better skill than the vote is giving him credit for. Nobody should go 0-fer in the Lion's Den.
Thanks...I think on general consensus, I slowed down towards the end and didn't finish strong. I'll work on that as well next time...
Good job guys...I love this.
Thanks...
Thanks...I think on general consensus, I slowed down towards the end and didn't finish strong. I'll work on that as well next time...
Thanks...
....fifteen million lurkers lying in the dark...i swear...
How you feeling, aki?
You taking it the wrong way I meant it aint like you just started rhyming and that style is the only one you know. Like I said before you a beast, you tried something that didn't work but you will return. I could care less if I win or not I just want to keep it moving. I aint complaining about votes I just didn't understand what yall was talking about with the line I wrote.
i guess we all have a lesson to learn in organized sportsmanship...
...even online, at the level we are trying to take this, you have to take your wins and losses as small appreciations compared to the fact that you were even willing to participate. i never cry at critique time because i have already beaten the world to it....
...even online, at the level we are trying to take this, you have to take your wins and losses as small appreciations compared to the fact that you were even willing to participate. i never cry at critique time because i have already beaten the world to it....
I didn't mean to take it in a bad way, I thought I took it the right way. I know what you mean, that's why I said I feel you on what you said.
Damn Mc, I'm on your side...oh, and I'm gonna find you a new panther avatar!
Here ya go:
or this:
Either one you can't go wrong!
I didn't mean to take it in a bad way, I thought I took it the right way. I know what you mean, that's why I said I feel you on what you said.
Damn Mc, I'm on your side...oh, and I'm gonna find you a new panter avatar!
what you trying to say, this one is played out?- Status
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