Costanza created a thread where he used ChatGPT to create a story based on The Handmaid's Tale... Using the characters from Martin.
Creatives on the Board, what do you think?
This is my version:
It’s been a little over a year since the takeover. Martin has been in jail for nine months. Martin's also a leader with the resistance. He was captured trying to protect Gina from the secret police. He’s been in jail ever since.
Tommy and Cole look out at the city through Martin’s window. It’s dreary today. Both men are nervous. A top level official is coming through today, and they have been ordered to meet him at Martin's old apartment.
Tommy is particularly nervous because he hasn’t seen Pam since the takeover. She’ll be there too, he heard.
Gina is the first to arrive. She knocks on the door. Cole opens it, and she falls into his arms crying tears of joy. Tommy walks up and the three embrace… all are crying. Gina is wearing a Martha’s uniform.
There’s another knock at the door. Tommy opens it. To his surprise, Pam is wearing in a handmaiden’s uniform. She looks at him with tears in her eyes. A guard at the door looks at them.
Pam steps in. Tommy closes the door. Then they all fall into each other’s arms, crying. Once they break the huddle, Cole is the first one to speak.
They’re going to make you a handmaiden, Gina. The high level official is coming to rape both you and Pam. They’re going to make Cole and I watch. It’s going to be filmed and sent to Martin. If he doesn’t talk after seeing the video, they’re going to put us on the wall.
Cole
Are y’all crazy? I couldn’t kill either of you even if I wanted too. Now look… any mutha-fucka who comes through that door I’m going to kill… gun or no gun.
They all looked at each other and cried again… hugging. Bruh Man then led both Gina and Pam out of the window.
The door knob starts to turn, the door is pushed open slowly. Tommy and Cole look toward the door. Someone is stepping into the room. All they can see is a white shoe.
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(I'm not too good with structure... I'm still learning y'all- PsiBorg)
Creatives on the Board, what do you think?
This is my version:
“The Roll Out”
INT. Martin’s Apartment-Detroit Michigan-Early Morning
INT. Martin’s Apartment-Detroit Michigan-Early Morning
It’s been a little over a year since the takeover. Martin has been in jail for nine months. Martin's also a leader with the resistance. He was captured trying to protect Gina from the secret police. He’s been in jail ever since.
Tommy and Cole look out at the city through Martin’s window. It’s dreary today. Both men are nervous. A top level official is coming through today, and they have been ordered to meet him at Martin's old apartment.
Tommy is particularly nervous because he hasn’t seen Pam since the takeover. She’ll be there too, he heard.
Gina is the first to arrive. She knocks on the door. Cole opens it, and she falls into his arms crying tears of joy. Tommy walks up and the three embrace… all are crying. Gina is wearing a Martha’s uniform.
Gina
Oh my god I’m glad to see you guys. I think about you all every single day.Tommy
So do I Gina. I wish that things were the way they used to be.Gina
Any word on Pam?Cole
No. But we heard that she’s supposed to be here too.There’s another knock at the door. Tommy opens it. To his surprise, Pam is wearing in a handmaiden’s uniform. She looks at him with tears in her eyes. A guard at the door looks at them.
Pam
Under his eye.Tommy
Under his eye.Pam steps in. Tommy closes the door. Then they all fall into each other’s arms, crying. Once they break the huddle, Cole is the first one to speak.
Cole
Look y’all. Real talk, we have to find a way to Canada. This is some bullshit right here.Gina
Cole, I'm thinking the same thing. But I can’t see how we can pull it off.Pam
I can’t believe I’m saying this but I’m with you, Cole. These sorry mutha-fuckas have been grooming me to be a fucking handmaid. I’ll kill myself before I let one of these religious faggots touch me.Cole
Canada is not too far from here.Pam
The way they’re watching the roads and everything, it minus whale be a million miles away.Gina
Between the four of us, we can figure something out… Sheeeesh!Pam
Tommy, you’ve been extra quiet. What is it, Man?Tommy
A high level official will be here shortly. He’s coming here to interrogate us. They’ve been trying to break Martin, but he won’t bend. I’m sorry, Gina. But they’re going to use you and Pam to get to Martin.They’re going to make you a handmaiden, Gina. The high level official is coming to rape both you and Pam. They’re going to make Cole and I watch. It’s going to be filmed and sent to Martin. If he doesn’t talk after seeing the video, they’re going to put us on the wall.
Everyone starts crying again.
Cole
Fuck that shit! We’re gonna die in this mutha-fucka today. Ain’t no fuckin’ way I’mma stand here and watch you two get raped. Mm Mm, not Coley Cole.Cole
Tommy
Calm down ColeCole
No nigga. Ain’t no fuckin’ calm down… This shit is real, Bro.Pam
Damn, the world must be coming to an end, because I agree with Cole again. I’d rather die here with you all than live in this fucking concentration camp of a country.Gina
I won’t lie, y’all. I’m scared as Hell. But I don’t know if I can kill myself. Tommy, I know that what I’m about to say isn’t fair to you. And, I’m going to ask you to forgive me for asking. But will you kill me? I’d rather you take my life, than to have one of these assholes rape me just to get at Martin.Pam
Yeah, Tommy, Cole. I’d rather have the same thing happen to me. Just make it quick. Shit… as quick as you possibly can.Cole
Are y’all crazy? I couldn’t kill either of you even if I wanted too. Now look… any mutha-fucka who comes through that door I’m going to kill… gun or no gun.
Pam
What are you going to kill him with, Cole? A spoon? It’s easier to choke us out.Tommy
Look y’all just stop. Ain’t nobody killing nobody. I have a plan already. Before the official gets here, Gina and Pam will be gone. But Cole, you and I are going to get tortured like Martin, Man. We’ll have to be strong like him.Cole
I’m with it… I ain’t saying shit.Gina
There are guards everywhere Tommy. How are we going to get out of this room let alone the building?There’s a light tapping on the window. Tommy opens it. Bruh Man comes through.
Bruh Man
Was hattnin, Y’all? Hey Tom, you told them the plan yet?Bruh Man
Tommy
No Bruh Man, I haven’t. I think it's best coming from you.Bruh Man
O’kay. Listen y’all. This is how it’s going to go down. Gina and Pam… Y’all comin’ wit me. My crew has a safe house on the other side of town. Y’all a be safe there. Y’all a be in Canada by tomorrow afternoon.Pam
Nigga what?Bruh Man
Yeah yeah, y’all a be in Canada tomorrow afternoon. I know, y’all thought Bruh Man was a simple mutha-fucka, huh? But naw… Bruh Man saw this shit coming years ago. That’s why I moved like I moved. I can get in and out of any place undetected. Now are y’all in or are y’all out? Bruh Man hasta roll out soon.They all looked at each other and cried again… hugging. Bruh Man then led both Gina and Pam out of the window.
Cole
That was good shit Tommy.Tommy
It ain’t over, Brother. That official is going to go nuts on us when he gets here and Pam and Gina are nowhere to be…The door knob starts to turn, the door is pushed open slowly. Tommy and Cole look toward the door. Someone is stepping into the room. All they can see is a white shoe.
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(I'm not too good with structure... I'm still learning y'all- PsiBorg)